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Omnipotent Sea
Of your power
I am resolute
determined
unfaltering
I salute
Amid your force
a crushing wave
breaking
forever
on the brave
The water’s surge
and steadfast tide
swelling
overhead
I respectfully abide
The ocean’s hold
asserts easily
confident
sureness
I bow accordingly
I am resolute
determined
unfaltering
I salute
Amid your force
a crushing wave
breaking
forever
on the brave
The water’s surge
and steadfast tide
swelling
overhead
I respectfully abide
The ocean’s hold
asserts easily
confident
sureness
I bow accordingly
Published 6th May 2017
| Edited 15th Jan 2018
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7th May 2017 12:08pm
Respect the power of the sea! Yea...
Another excellent addition to your
growing catalog of excellence :)
Another excellent addition to your
growing catalog of excellence :)
7th May 2017 3:24pm
7th May 2017 1:02pm
Everything flows superbly in this until the very last line, precisely where an interruption to the momentum would benefit. Well done!
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