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Too busy
She's too busy to call
She's too busy to write
She's too busy to think
She's too busy to care
She's too busy to need
She's too busy to love
That bitch is damn busy
She's too busy to write
She's too busy to think
She's too busy to care
She's too busy to need
She's too busy to love
That bitch is damn busy
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26th Aug 2011 3:21pm
the one I'm talking about here should be studied. I've killed myself trying to get with her and she is always fucking busy. then she'll throw me a crumb and, like an asshole, I'm on the hunt again.
it's not her...it's me and that kills me.
it's not her...it's me and that kills me.
re: 13
26th Aug 2011 3:23pm
re: 13
26th Aug 2011 4:34pm
Indifference is perhaps the most hurting...
The second is when one realise that one is worth nothing more than a lie.
The second is when one realise that one is worth nothing more than a lie.
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Too busy
27th Aug 2011 3:00am
Indifference is exactly what I got from her. Oh, she is a very, very tempting woman and I am a very, very, big fool. Not to say she lead me on, perhaps a bit of teasing, but her skill at keeping my away is something to be studied. Very skillful.
re: Too busy
27th Aug 2011 11:32am
Women at times love to be baits; when you bite they pull back a bit, and makes you want more. Because when you own, you take for granted...
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clear....
27th Aug 2011 6:01pm
if shes 2 busy den she aint da 1....& ur words build up 2 it Beautifully....even wit da frustration shown from calln her a bitch...dat was classic....nice job....
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TB
29th Aug 2011 6:01pm
She's too busy and she ain't the one. Logic says that and it's clear but what is that other thing that pushes people toward something that is clearly a lost cause?
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