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River of Feelings

what is it?
when you open wide
and let me in
a pleasure ride

a river of feelings
a forceful stream
carries me away
to share the dream

that you are with me
and I'm with you
all around
and inside too

synchronizing
moving in time
rhythmic entrainment
your body and mine

lingerng feelings
friction and slide
tongue on tongue
and too when inside

what is it?
I think I know
loving you
is part of the flow

the river of feelings
the forceful stream
which carries me away
with you in a dream
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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