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POMEGRANATE
Who is this with the huge green fan
Fanning pilgrims shining
Shrineward
Who is this with the mad raging eyes
Shading the burning rays
Shooing beggars keeping flies away
As I bow in prayer
And lift hands soaked in the offering of roses
It's petal scent the sweat of my pores
Who is this in the ragged homespun
Keeping us as the light falls
And bell rings and lanterns lit
Who is this who has no words
Teaching the holy axioms
His naked feet cleaned
In the whirl wind dust
His skin charcoaled waiting for the wordless
Lend me your homespun
Let my feet be cleaned in dirt
And I will be the sun and fan
As I bow down to pray
Who is this child with pomegranate
Grown in the fields of the mujahideen
Seeking the sweet within
Piercing the orange leather
Blooding aril rubies
He is his mother her arm outstretched
Waving goodbye to a moving train
And the train itself
And the boy on the train and red seeds
Fanning pilgrims shining
Shrineward
Who is this with the mad raging eyes
Shading the burning rays
Shooing beggars keeping flies away
As I bow in prayer
And lift hands soaked in the offering of roses
It's petal scent the sweat of my pores
Who is this in the ragged homespun
Keeping us as the light falls
And bell rings and lanterns lit
Who is this who has no words
Teaching the holy axioms
His naked feet cleaned
In the whirl wind dust
His skin charcoaled waiting for the wordless
Lend me your homespun
Let my feet be cleaned in dirt
And I will be the sun and fan
As I bow down to pray
Who is this child with pomegranate
Grown in the fields of the mujahideen
Seeking the sweet within
Piercing the orange leather
Blooding aril rubies
He is his mother her arm outstretched
Waving goodbye to a moving train
And the train itself
And the boy on the train and red seeds
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Anonymous
3rd May 2017 3:10pm
Pomegranate is a sacred symbol in my culture Whale so naturally i was drawn to this poem and needless to say the content delivered more than i hoped for.. Magnificient imagery and metaphors.

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3rd May 2017 9:49pm
thank you Rina - so kind to follow through the symbolism and accept this offering
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Anonymous
3rd May 2017 4:43pm
I agree with Vee above. Excellent imagery and metaphor. Flows so well too.
really enjoyed the read, ty
really enjoyed the read, ty

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Anonymous
3rd May 2017 5:15pm
Such a vivid insight
to something that is
(that I may have)
overlooked on a
day-to-day basis.
I admire the words
and the contrast of
this piece; well penned ...
~Devlin

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3rd May 2017 9:50pm
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3rd May 2017 8:20pm
Beautiful. I feel like the fourth stanza is the crux of the work. Well done Whale
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3rd May 2017 9:51pm
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3rd May 2017 9:36pm
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3rd May 2017 9:52pm
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3rd May 2017 9:53pm
dearest Whale you are a master poet and this a fine example of that..
it transported me..
love Brenda
it transported me..
love Brenda
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4th May 2017 2:54am
That final stanza, Brother. Sheesh at the power of the caboose keeping the train together.
Beautiful write.
Beautiful write.
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4th May 2017 3:19am
Hey Sister - glad you're here! And congrats on running a great comp for National Poetry Week
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indeed beautifully done my friend, i have always loved the pomegranate as symbolism, metaphor, imagery, artistic object, and tasty snack
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10th May 2017 10:28am