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Feeling Lonely, At Least the Lemonade is Cold
It's a beautiful Spring evening
Feeling melancholy though
There are times you want to write a poem
You know the one
It's the absentee work
That's been rattling around your brain since forever
It never comes out the way you see it
Azure Blue segues into a black and white quagmire
Swore off booze during the work week
Already feel like caving
The peach lemonade is a new brand
Sweet and tart with a caffeine booster
Brain turning splintery
I kinda live for that fuzzy karma
Someone told me today that they loved meeting me
It was really sweet
To be thought of that way by a stranger
Banking it
Feeling melancholy though
There are times you want to write a poem
You know the one
It's the absentee work
That's been rattling around your brain since forever
It never comes out the way you see it
Azure Blue segues into a black and white quagmire
Swore off booze during the work week
Already feel like caving
The peach lemonade is a new brand
Sweet and tart with a caffeine booster
Brain turning splintery
I kinda live for that fuzzy karma
Someone told me today that they loved meeting me
It was really sweet
To be thought of that way by a stranger
Banking it
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Re. Feeling Lonely, At Least the Lemonade is Cold
Anonymous
2nd May 2017 2:32am
I personally would love to meet you! Straight talk over coffee or lemonade would be most welcome. I always feel like there's a poem rattling around up there I can never catch. Much enjoyed
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2nd May 2017 4:06am
I'm writing all day long, the DUP gods should allow me more entries We'll have to setup a meeting ..... Thx
Re. Feeling Lonely, At Least the Lemonade is Cold
2nd May 2017 3:13am
I for one think a conversation with you over shots of whiskey or morning coffee would be quite an adventure. Your style is captivating to say the least.
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Re: Re. Feeling Lonely, At Least the Lemonade is Cold
2nd May 2017 4:08am
I'm a slow but steady whiskey drinker at this point I'd want that conversation to last so fasten your seat belt luv. ..
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2nd May 2017 4:15am
I think whiskey is meant to be sipped slowly to really be appreciated. As for that conversation I live on the wild side, where is the fun in buckling in when you can just enjoy the ride doll?
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2nd May 2017 11:53am
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2nd May 2017 2:47pm
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2nd May 2017 9:33pm
Re. Feeling Lonely, At Least the Lemonade is Cold
2nd May 2017 4:27am
I feel you on this write Poet the lemonade sounds most invigorating as does the meeting.. p.s. i'm never lonely with you about..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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2nd May 2017 11:55am
Re. Feeling Lonely, At Least the Lemonade is Cold
2nd May 2017 9:23am
I get that rattle inside my head
I wrestle it down to the page
till the ref slams the canvas one two three...
I wrestle it down to the page
till the ref slams the canvas one two three...
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Re: Re. Feeling Lonely, At Least the Lemonade is Cold
2nd May 2017 11:57am
It might be the most intriguing part of writing. When the words don't come fast and you gotta work for the feeling ... Thx John
Re. Feeling Lonely, At Least the Lemonade is Cold
2nd May 2017 8:17pm
I have never found a lemonade that cures or helps with loneliness - I must try some :-p
fascinating, excellent ink as usual :-)
fascinating, excellent ink as usual :-)
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2nd May 2017 9:32pm