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guess we've all had it ...
he had a thing about death
and I'd never seen anything like it
so I asked him where he'd
got it
but he said he hadn't
totally
got it
yet ...
Published 30th Apr 2017
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30th Apr 2017 3:33pm
Great - it's all in the timing :)
(how about a few lines gap between "got it" and "yet"?)
(how about a few lines gap between "got it" and "yet"?)
thanks...
words and how they are placed/spaced
can be very important,
it's just that in this case
I thought I'd leave it up to the reader
to pull 'em apart ... :)
words and how they are placed/spaced
can be very important,
it's just that in this case
I thought I'd leave it up to the reader
to pull 'em apart ... :)
