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Nursery II
Do not break the cell from within
Of wing'd soul that floats the lab'rinth
Tending deepest niches sightless
In its world of total darkness
Of impending writhing epic
In the wards of deep pandemic
Life with tender strike & purging
From its flight, this like, this surgeon
To the parasites no quarter
By this epidemic thwarter
Cosmos flares of ash in shatters
Second coming rise dark matter
The cure behind the anal sun
Forgiveness of the Ancient One
If not too late to resurrect
In nest of birthing stars reflect
April 29 ( NaPoWriMo 2017 )
Of wing'd soul that floats the lab'rinth
Tending deepest niches sightless
In its world of total darkness
Of impending writhing epic
In the wards of deep pandemic
Life with tender strike & purging
From its flight, this like, this surgeon
To the parasites no quarter
By this epidemic thwarter
Cosmos flares of ash in shatters
Second coming rise dark matter
The cure behind the anal sun
Forgiveness of the Ancient One
If not too late to resurrect
In nest of birthing stars reflect
April 29 ( NaPoWriMo 2017 )
Published 29th Apr 2017
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29th Apr 2017 5:22pm
29th Apr 2017 5:24pm
29th Apr 2017 11:21pm
I'm not sure I fully get it but I love this just the same. The surgeon seems more a god than doctor. Then there's the Second Coming and the arrival of dark matter, followed with that cosmic touch at the end. This nursery might contain entire worlds for the babes to choose from. Fine and visionary work, Jade!
Dearest friend crowfly... Dark matter is often where new stars are formed (and from them can bring entire worlds), and yes, god & not literally doctor. But just with those few affirmations, the rest can become your own as the reader and still be right. Your embrace of my ode is wonderful to know from your thoughts shared with me. My thanks of gratitude.
I am really over the top with the language:
Tending deepest niches sightless
In its world of total darkness
To the parasites no quarter
By this epidemic thwarter
Are two of my favorites...
One day still to go, and we'll have done it!🐯🎉🏆🎖🏅🎉😸
Tending deepest niches sightless
In its world of total darkness
To the parasites no quarter
By this epidemic thwarter
Are two of my favorites...
One day still to go, and we'll have done it!🐯🎉🏆🎖🏅🎉😸
30th Apr 2017 6:39am
Thank you so much, thomas, and yes, we'll not only do it, we HAVE done it. My #30 will go up in about two hours!
*borrows your emojis*
🐯🎉🏆🎖🏅🎉😸
*borrows your emojis*
🐯🎉🏆🎖🏅🎉😸
Anonymous
30th Apr 2017 2:49pm
Nemesis returns....a very deep write
Nice one, jade
I love the metaphor in each line too.
Thanks for the read.
:) miki.
Nice one, jade
I love the metaphor in each line too.
Thanks for the read.
:) miki.
Thank you so much, Miki. It's an honor to have you and your thoughts shared here for me.
