Notes on- being broken, and losing the only true path to completion

To me...It defies logic how such talent can't be world wide known....

Not so much talent as the penning of the loss of one of the greatest opportunities in my life but I'm glad you see talent and I can say the same for you and your work,PM. Thank you much.

Thank you,PM! Appreciate you much!

Powerful work. Your first stanza captivates with the straightforward revelation of such intimacy shared and speaks to the nature of our existence as mortal, sentient beings. Looking to find a life beyond this. Looking to find eternity and each other. Your second stanza steps the music into more tender territory. Lovely. The metaphor of bullet casings and insights into the mindset of Russia in your third stanza is creative and insightful. You close on such a touching, nihilistic note. This is beautiful work. You paint with a gorgeously ruined and revealing brush whilst always remaining tasteful. Much respect and admiration as always.

Your comment is beautiful. Thank you ever so much for such a detailed and uplifting comment,Daniel! Xx

Once again you leave me in awe... it takes courage to look at your mistakes and pen them down...

Truth is, noticing mistakes doesn't always lead to change. I have noticed them too late, but it doesn't matter. Thank you, I love you 💖

This is incredibly heartbreaking to read. The emotions flow through this piece like a river. Unfortunately the best creations are born out of tragedy. You've written something beautiful here. I hope that writing it at least helped alleviate some of the burden you seem to bear.

My apologies for any heartbreak caused,poet. I appreciate such a wonderful comment. Writing relieves some, but not all of the hurt. Appreciated! Thank you.

"The shell of an angel"
Digging deep here
A fine write

Thank you so much,Whale! I appreciate your great comment and time taken to read and leave your thoughts on this one.