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Irene
Irene
Beautifully serene
Madonna personified
Angel by my bedside
Irene
Lingers long after twilight
Bestowing sensations divine
Taking, taking and sometimes giving
Fighting and losing
I surrender my very soul
To earth-shattering loving
Earth shatters, shudders, thunder roll
So Here I stand shivering
Longing for Irene
Breasts, nipples hard aching
For my Lesbian lover Irene
Beautifully serene
Madonna personified
Angel by my bedside
Irene
Lingers long after twilight
Bestowing sensations divine
Taking, taking and sometimes giving
Fighting and losing
I surrender my very soul
To earth-shattering loving
Earth shatters, shudders, thunder roll
So Here I stand shivering
Longing for Irene
Breasts, nipples hard aching
For my Lesbian lover Irene
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re: Irene
26th Aug 2011 3:28pm
Irene
26th Aug 2011 3:50pm
And heartbreak is heartbreak.
Question: Does more come of heartbreak or love? Does more come from happiness or unhappiness?
Is our soul a mix of these things or not?
For me, my life has been shaped more by pain and failure than joy and success. I'm sure others are not so different.
Question: Does more come of heartbreak or love? Does more come from happiness or unhappiness?
Is our soul a mix of these things or not?
For me, my life has been shaped more by pain and failure than joy and success. I'm sure others are not so different.
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re: Irene
26th Aug 2011 4:31pm
Unfortunate events shaped lives, mine and others, perhaps yours too. The highway of life also has meandering paths that sometimes we wander in and at times get lost for a while. That shaped us for something more than the mundane. To know love for a while is good but to be unloved for the longest time after that love...that is bad.
Irene
27th Aug 2011 2:45am
So true. I don't think I've ever felt totally unloved. Somewhere, someone, has loved me my whole life. I'm not saying I loved them as well but in turn I have loved without being loved back. It's a rare event to love and be loved at the same time. But does that last? Is it really important for it to last? I really don't know. What choice do we have but to take it as it comes.
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re: Irene
It has been said that to be loved and not love is better than to love and not loved. Blazing love does not last, its like a candle; it wont light your whole night through and when that dies, we light another candle...it could be for the same person, or it could be another...but it is love none the less.
loved ur irene...
6th Jan 2012 10:38am
re: loved ur irene...
6th Jan 2012 12:04pm
Hi, Thank you so much for reading this dear Joetina Arc! I am so glad. Thanks for commenting too.
YOU ARE VERY BRAVE
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2012 10:51am
You are brave to come out of the closet...
but this is a safe and I hope an open-minded place
but this is a safe and I hope an open-minded place
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re: YOU ARE VERY BRAVE
3rd Apr 2012 11:12pm
There was no closet Kitty. Just passing through, a one time experience, a long time ago. Thank you for reading and commenting...on this very early poem.
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