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Patchwork Coquette
I don't know how to be beautiful,
I take my compliments like a hit.
I let my curls run wild and free,
just like my two-bit heart.
Ain't got no fancy stockings, ain't got no red high heels,
I'm tank tops & denim, how it looks and how it feels.
My pretty dresses hang alone, waiting for the light,
when I strap my knives inside my boot,
they always fit just right.
The boulevard's a battlefield, we sing the anthem of war.
Today I'm a patchwork coquette, tonight I'm a nazi whore.
I've danced with the gypsies who made betrayal an art
These last lonely tears are pearls for a broken heart
If you see me in my tanker boots and dark blue summer dress,
don't you call me beautiful, cause I'm a glamorous mess.
(Artwork:John Seaman)
I take my compliments like a hit.
I let my curls run wild and free,
just like my two-bit heart.
Ain't got no fancy stockings, ain't got no red high heels,
I'm tank tops & denim, how it looks and how it feels.
My pretty dresses hang alone, waiting for the light,
when I strap my knives inside my boot,
they always fit just right.
The boulevard's a battlefield, we sing the anthem of war.
Today I'm a patchwork coquette, tonight I'm a nazi whore.
I've danced with the gypsies who made betrayal an art
These last lonely tears are pearls for a broken heart
If you see me in my tanker boots and dark blue summer dress,
don't you call me beautiful, cause I'm a glamorous mess.
(Artwork:John Seaman)
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Re. Patchwork Coquette
24th Apr 2017 6:35am
it's a tough walk out on the boulevards, Kas,
a woman needs to be armed & dangerous;
glamour wasn't meant for patches & stark uniforms
but the poetry is beautiful...
a woman needs to be armed & dangerous;
glamour wasn't meant for patches & stark uniforms
but the poetry is beautiful...
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Re: Re. Patchwork Coquette
The streets are too mean for beautiful,
so we keep it safely tucked
between the lines of a poem.
Or perhaps a beautiful comment.
Thank you, John...
so we keep it safely tucked
between the lines of a poem.
Or perhaps a beautiful comment.
Thank you, John...
Re. Patchwork Coquette
24th Apr 2017 12:00pm
Aaawww ...well I'd call you beautiful, because that's exactly what your soul bleeds...beauty! :)
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25th Apr 2017 6:48am
What a nice thing to say, thanks for the kind words, Pm, really appreciate it...
Re. Patchwork Coquette
24th Apr 2017 12:26pm
Stunning last line to an amazing poem, dear Kasai!
I think there's nothing more sexy than a woman with a little dress and some kick ass boots :-)
I have a pair of high heels... they're standing in my closet looking pretty, can't even walk on them (did I just admit that online? Yes, I did)
Really like this line as well: "Today I'm a patchwork coquette, tonight I'm a nazi whore"
I think there's nothing more sexy than a woman with a little dress and some kick ass boots :-)
I have a pair of high heels... they're standing in my closet looking pretty, can't even walk on them (did I just admit that online? Yes, I did)
Really like this line as well: "Today I'm a patchwork coquette, tonight I'm a nazi whore"
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You said it, Duende, somethin about a great pair of boots. And uh...about those heels, I don't know how women walk around in those things, an accident waiting to happen for a woman like me. Thanks for the great comment, kind lady...
Re. Patchwork Coquette
24th Apr 2017 1:59pm
The ability to be ourselves stems from a gift of courage deep within us. A yearning to be free of societal convention or labeled expectation.
To be wild and windy whether barefoot or in boots. This encapsulates that innate feminine Spirit to be owned by no man.
Muchly enjoyed, Kas.
To be wild and windy whether barefoot or in boots. This encapsulates that innate feminine Spirit to be owned by no man.
Muchly enjoyed, Kas.
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Re: Re. Patchwork Coquette
25th Apr 2017 8:00am
Hmm, guess I never thought about it that way, makes a lot of sense. To be free, to be completely unaffected by expectations of what beautiful is supposed to look like. Perhaps that, in itself is what it means to be truly beautiful. I just love your thoughtful comments, Ahavati, thank you for the kind visit...
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Anonymous
24th Apr 2017 5:57pm
I am glad you commented on my poem. It lead me to read your work and I'm happy I did.
I adore this line
The boulevard's a battlefield, we sing the anthem of war.
Today I'm a patchwork coquette, tonight I'm a nazi whore.
sometimes we must be chameleons, survival is a funny game :)
I adore this line
The boulevard's a battlefield, we sing the anthem of war.
Today I'm a patchwork coquette, tonight I'm a nazi whore.
sometimes we must be chameleons, survival is a funny game :)
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Re: Re. Patchwork Coquette
25th Apr 2017 8:34am
I'm glad I found your poem, I really enjoyed it and I have to thank you for coming to visit, I appreciate the feedback and your taking the time to share it with me. And yes, so true; we blend to survive, even as we embrace our differences...
Re. Patchwork Coquette
24th Apr 2017 6:34pm
The armour we wear only protects what the shallow attempt to destroy...The real treasures are hidden deep inside and yours are brilliant.
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25th Apr 2017 9:23am
So true, I suppose we have to protect it somehow. I was never any good at conformity anyway. Thank you for such kind words, Tim...
Re. Patchwork Coquette
24th Apr 2017 7:08pm
lovely Kasai you are a work of art in this gave me a wry smile for the rough woman in you..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. Patchwork Coquette
25th Apr 2017 9:41am
I have a feeling you know where I'm coming from, Crim, thanks for the smile, sweet lady...
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Anonymous
21st May 2017 7:27pm
There is always so much beauty found within messes I think...a mess is often blended with so many elements, it takes those who can focus on all of the components to see the interesting tidbits found hidden under the rubble...loved this ink, Sweet Kasai...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Patchwork Coquette
28th May 2017 8:09am
Thank you so much, Taryn, perhaps the world would be a bland an uninteresting place without those lovely little messes to keep things uniform. Perfection is a pretty thought, but maybe the imperfections are what make it what it is. I just love your visits...