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The Past
I still miss the smile of a mad man.
Someone I used to know.
Before he lost his mind,
and I had to let him go.
Someone I used to know.
Before he lost his mind,
and I had to let him go.
Published 23rd Apr 2017
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23rd Apr 2017 7:06pm
mad he may have been yet his smile was honest, rest assured! Beautiful little snippet ITR!
24th Apr 2017 00:27am
You never disappoint, RainChallenger.
It hurts when people change, especially if it's toward the negative traits. And as much as we want to believe, and hold on, hoping our Love will be enough to bring them back, we must also realize this is a part of their personal evolution.
All we can do is let go and move on with ours.
It hurts when people change, especially if it's toward the negative traits. And as much as we want to believe, and hold on, hoping our Love will be enough to bring them back, we must also realize this is a part of their personal evolution.
All we can do is let go and move on with ours.
24th Apr 2017 3:22am
You always understand my poetry and I appreciate your interest in my work, thank you!
Anonymous
26th Apr 2017 9:15pm
Oh my little gods, how this impacted my mood and thoughts,,
I love your style beautiful.
I love your style beautiful.
4th May 2022 6:14am
Lady Caroline Lamb wrote of poet Lord Byron: 'Mad, bad and dangerous to know' - could understand the fascination with crazy bad boys which the poem sums up.
7th May 2022 5:15am
