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I had a dream about you
it's your hard
no holds bar poetry
that gets me
I saw you
like you portrait yourself
raw, sharp edged
rough kind of guy
with a touch of tenderness
in my dream
I was composing poetry for you
you were busy talking on the phone
while I thought of prose
to entice you
just another woman
from a lonely page
of a book you've yet to read
I'm hint of whiskey
a dash bawdy whore
with a tender lavender
scented soul
taste of me at your leisure
& know that I take your poetry
into my dreamscapes
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Re. Poet
21st Apr 2017 4:50pm
Dear Crim, this is such a beautiful poem!
I can't choose between two favorite parts, so I'm gonna quote them both:
"just another woman
from a lonely page
of a book you've yet to read"
"a tender lavender
scented soul" > ah, the sound of these lines!
Love, Duende
I can't choose between two favorite parts, so I'm gonna quote them both:
"just another woman
from a lonely page
of a book you've yet to read"
"a tender lavender
scented soul" > ah, the sound of these lines!
Love, Duende
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:01pm
Re. Poet
21st Apr 2017 5:12pm
such a beautiful love poem from one poet to another - loved it :-)
terrific stuff - ehugs David :-)
terrific stuff - ehugs David :-)
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:02pm
Re. Poet
21st Apr 2017 5:46pm
Lucky barstud! you write gem Brenda! and no...you're never and were never less of a gem in talent than any other here!
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24th Apr 2017 8:02pm
Re. Poet
21st Apr 2017 6:18pm
We should all be so observant and gratefully express appreciation for the art in our lives. xo
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:04pm
thank you lovely lady this was a real dream I had & I was busy composing poetry for this man while he was busying himself.. such an impact his write have on me.. love Brenda
Re. Poet
21st Apr 2017 6:33pm
What a lucky guy to be able to read this lovely poem and know it was written with him in mind.
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:04pm
thank you Jerry though I doubt he knows how much his poetry affects me.. love Brenda
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2017 6:36pm
"I'm hint of whiskey
a dash bawdy whore
with a tender lavender
scented soul"
This is gorgeous! Such complexity is incredible. It always makes me happy when someone else writes to show appreciation from afar of the magic of another's pen. I've felt it too. Loved this one, dark angel
a dash bawdy whore
with a tender lavender
scented soul"
This is gorgeous! Such complexity is incredible. It always makes me happy when someone else writes to show appreciation from afar of the magic of another's pen. I've felt it too. Loved this one, dark angel
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:05pm
thank you lovely one for such a beautiful comment there is now a smile gracing my face :) love Crim
Re. Poet
21st Apr 2017 7:54pm
What more needs be said? Apart from how each stanza builds upon each other to make a triumph in total that is an achingly beautiful read and series of sentiments.
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:06pm
thank you Lord Viddax for such a wonderful comment I'm happy it came across as intended.. love Brenda
Re. Poet
21st Apr 2017 8:45pm
You continue to keep me in suspense of your next write and this one delivered.
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:07pm
Re. Poet
21st Apr 2017 9:10pm
oh my...what a...<catching breath>...it is hot and lovely...and not to be a broken record but i too loved this passage:
"I'm hint of whiskey
a dash bawdy whore
with a tender lavender
scented soul"
i think im sweating...nice job crimsin. :)
"I'm hint of whiskey
a dash bawdy whore
with a tender lavender
scented soul"
i think im sweating...nice job crimsin. :)
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:08pm
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2017 9:41pm
you know it`s a good poem
when there`s Whiskey involved ...
excellent tribute [to whomever] ...
in awe ...
~love to my Queen ... Devlin
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24th Apr 2017 8:09pm
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21st Apr 2017 9:58pm
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24th Apr 2017 8:10pm
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2017 10:13pm
Brenda.. this is simply brilliant, and full of honest love.. who ever inspired this, must be a lucky soul.. into the list it goes.. love...
Dave
Dave
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24th Apr 2017 8:10pm
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Anonymous
22nd Apr 2017 2:41am
Love you pretty lady and this!!
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:11pm
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Anonymous
22nd Apr 2017 9:10am
a wonderful write, feels so intimate in spite of all implied distance
thanks for this read, x
thanks for this read, x
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:12pm
thank you beautiful Miki love that you're here & graced my pages with your thoughts.. I'm only intimate with his writes so there is distance though I feel strongly about his poetic nature.. love Brenda
Re. Poet
22nd Apr 2017 8:51pm
I love the light-hearted tone you bring to this Crim. My favorite lines:
I'm hint of whiskey
a dash bawdy whore
with a tender lavender
scented soul
Sounds like the perfect Lady to me. Excellent work!
I'm hint of whiskey
a dash bawdy whore
with a tender lavender
scented soul
Sounds like the perfect Lady to me. Excellent work!
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:13pm
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Anonymous
23rd Apr 2017 4:57pm
neat with smokey hints of melancholy
i love the taste of this one brenda
xoxo
i love the taste of this one brenda
xoxo
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Re: Re. Poet
24th Apr 2017 8:14pm
thank you beautiful one you always make my week with your thoughts & visits.. love you woman :) xo Brenda
Re. Poet
3rd May 2017 7:04pm
you write like midnight on fire...i like ...are you dangerous...hope so !!!!!
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4th May 2017 00:39am
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Anonymous
12th May 2017 5:40am
The affects one's pen can have on us is truly an amazing gift...to be moved on so many emotional levels...you pay tribute to this art and this poet fabulously my Beautiful Brenda. Gorgeous!
I love you!
Love Taryn xoxo
I love you!
Love Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Poet
12th May 2017 11:37am
thank you beautiful one I really did take his poetry into my dreams it was very odd lol :) I love you so much! xo Brenda
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Anonymous
7th Jun 2017 11:29am
Whomever inspired the ink you have penned here should be honored .
Fantastic
Fantastic
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Re: Re. Poet
7th Jun 2017 11:45am
thank you dearest Ragnar it's just a poet whose writes I am passionate about.. love Crim