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Evening Haiku

The hills at twilight
have blood orange stains from a sun
that has set at dusk.

Written by IntoTheRain

Published 18th Apr 2017

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Re. Evening Haiku

- Edited 18th Apr 2017 3:17am

18th Apr 2017 3:16am

As though juice spilled from her overturned glass. Beautiful.

Reminds me of my Blue Ridge...

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Re. Evening Haiku

18th Apr 2017 7:10pm

Beautiful .. there is nothing like sunsets, everyone is different ..

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Re. Evening Haiku

Anonymous

19th Apr 2017 6:08am

I love these types of evenings while sitting on my porch,
i always never want to say goodbye to them

thank you for writing peaceful bliss