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Word Momentum
One word, once heard, suggests the next
invites companions to a
harmonious tale
each word, being a symbol
carries a whole story
and penetrates the veil
when words play together
they dance, transforming
into a different life to live
as they reach for the stars
you can hear whole symphonies
and parallel universes are created.
invites companions to a
harmonious tale
each word, being a symbol
carries a whole story
and penetrates the veil
when words play together
they dance, transforming
into a different life to live
as they reach for the stars
you can hear whole symphonies
and parallel universes are created.
Published 14th Apr 2017
| Edited 7th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Inspired by Ahavati's 'Parable Of Belief' {https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/269283-parable-of-belief/} in turn inspired by Johnny Blaze's 'Poetry Is Not' {https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/269274-poetry-is-not/}
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15th Apr 2017 1:36am
Beliefs coming together to form realities in universes formed by the coming together of words.
Awesome.
Awesome.
15th Apr 2017 4:52pm
Thank you, and for the RL too. At half-way through the NaPoWriMo I'm flagging a bit; your comments have re-energised me.
15th Apr 2017 1:41am
each word, being a symbol
carries a whole story
and penetrates the veil
Amazing! Now THIS is the heartbeat of poetry: Inspirational.
carries a whole story
and penetrates the veil
Amazing! Now THIS is the heartbeat of poetry: Inspirational.
15th Apr 2017 4:53pm
Thank you Ahavati for your enthusiastic response - and RL. I'm gathering strength again from the positive responses. That's what I call 'community support'.
15th Apr 2017 2:54am
15th Apr 2017 4:55pm
Thanks David - and for the RL. Hope you're having a nice break over the week-end.
Anonymous
15th Apr 2017 4:39am
Incredible piece!
15th Apr 2017 4:56pm
15th Apr 2017 6:46am
Wow... simply amazing!
The first stanza drew me in immediately... I like it when that happens!
The rest... equally beautiful, love the idea of dancing words :-)
The first stanza drew me in immediately... I like it when that happens!
The rest... equally beautiful, love the idea of dancing words :-)
15th Apr 2017 4:58pm
Thank you Duende. Words - Sound - Light - Movement ... it's all there somewhere in the universe - or maybe the universe is made up of them.
15th Apr 2017 11:38am
inspirational indeed- my applause to the trinity here- Johnny, Ahavati and Josh! gem of poems and their poets!
15th Apr 2017 5:02pm
15th Apr 2017 3:47pm
One word, once heard, suggests the next
invites companions to a
harmonious tale
Beautiful Josh!
invites companions to a
harmonious tale
Beautiful Josh!
15th Apr 2017 5:04pm
Hi Mel, glad you you found it inspiring. The positive responses have been a good boost for me at the half-way point of NaPoWriMo. Keep going too, sister!
Anonymous
20th Apr 2017 11:41pm
I absolutely love this
I love how your mind works and how this reminds me just how important words are
I think too often people forget the impact and power behind the words they speak, write, etc.
I love how your mind works and how this reminds me just how important words are
I think too often people forget the impact and power behind the words they speak, write, etc.
7th May 2017 9:17pm
I've only just seen your comment, Beth - and thank you. Words can both heal and destroy a life (especially put-down words spoken to a child)
