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Comet High
When I kiss you
I find
every tissue unwinds
I fall into
uncharted times
I'm so into you
I'm blind .
Swirling away
with you
turning pictured dreams
into tree lined avenues
there are no seams
it's real through and through
all the obscene
is wiped clean
leaving the truth .
The green of your eyes
puts my mind
in overload
together we climb
the heights
of the unknown
I hold you and sigh
as all time
is put on hold
your love is sublime
comet high
rust turns to gold .
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