'In Memorium'

This was so sad. <3 hugs

Thank you...always.

This reads in a keening sound to me.  I keep seeing souls struggling lately.  What's with the world these days?  Offering hugs if you need one

Thank you always.

Desolation is what crossed over me when i read these words PM...my arms enfold you whether you need them or not  

Thank you. Always

This is beautiful and sad at the same time. It is best to write during those bad and sad times. That is when we heal the most. Hugs to you, my dear.

Thank you.always

aw Poe I feel you my friend this made my heart sad but I can relate to this feeling..

love and hugs..

Crim

Thank you always

The weight of sadness was palpable in this one, Poetik. Written straight from the Spirit connecting with its audience. .

Thank you always

This was really painful to read, dear!

Sending light your way...

((hugs))

Thank you...gratefully

Melancholy is the flow of the verses,
like a cold, heavy wind that blows in with the rain...

Thank you, always grateful

"Dusted ashes gust" - fine write Poetik

Thanks bro.

Very sad, honey. But beautiful

Thank you always

:(

Thank you...grateful

very sad but thoughtful

Thank you.... very grateful for your thoughts

The space between words felt to me like someone who is crying and speaking. The way we sometimes choke on our words between sobs. Also how the way the words seperated from each other gave that illusion too. Was that intention? Because I believe it adds to the poem. Gave it that extra depth.

Actually it was, BUT I wasn't crying...I was in a dark place though. Thank u for such a wonderful comment, I promise to return the favor whenever u post something  K? :)

😢

Thanks...