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Sand Scape
Wonders of nature never cease
Such a lovely masterpiece
A coastline’s canvas left untainted
Spiritual, the picture painted
Only ecology could leave this trace
And still have the power to erase
Almost an illusion to the eyes
Perfect reflection feigning sun rise
Like a sculptor’s magic hand
Stones are carving in the sand
Left behind by the ocean’s tide
Elements of beauty in every stride
As the rocks make their retreat
Composition easily complete
Seeing impressions of a tree
Walking along the Atlantic sea
Such a lovely masterpiece
A coastline’s canvas left untainted
Spiritual, the picture painted
Only ecology could leave this trace
And still have the power to erase
Almost an illusion to the eyes
Perfect reflection feigning sun rise
Like a sculptor’s magic hand
Stones are carving in the sand
Left behind by the ocean’s tide
Elements of beauty in every stride
As the rocks make their retreat
Composition easily complete
Seeing impressions of a tree
Walking along the Atlantic sea
Published 11th Apr 2017
| Edited 12th Apr 2017
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11th Apr 2017 1:23am
"Wonders of nature never cease" an absolutely true statement!! Loved the entire piece!
11th Apr 2017 3:38pm
11th Apr 2017 3:24am
11th Apr 2017 3:39pm
11th Apr 2017 2:30pm
"Only ecology could leave this trace
And still have the power to erase " ...
... Nature's power to create and re-create - which is very reassuring.
I also read your poem backwards (i.e.: from the bottom line up) - and it reads pretty good that way too. A palindrome, no less.
And still have the power to erase " ...
... Nature's power to create and re-create - which is very reassuring.
I also read your poem backwards (i.e.: from the bottom line up) - and it reads pretty good that way too. A palindrome, no less.
11th Apr 2017 3:41pm
Josh...Thank you for that, I think I like it better from the bottom up. Amazing feedback! Plan to re-write!
11th Apr 2017 11:48pm
I just love rhyming couplets - a very refreshing poem :-)
shows much skill :-)
shows much skill :-)
12th Apr 2017 12:38pm
12th Apr 2017 2:59pm
Thank you Soul for the amazing response and I am honoured by the RL. Much Love. Xxx
