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Captivated
the dark fey took me captive
deep under the canopied forest
their devilishly handsome Lord
captivated by my wonderment with nature
saw me among the humans
& could not bare it
I was brought before his court
shivering with fright
he warmed me instantly
with his emerald stare
& his hushed tones
so like the whispering of leaves
the trees have always been my friends
since childhood I'd told them my secrets
when there was no other to be trusted
they stood stoic & true never telling a soul
not knowing I was silently being watched
by the fairy kingdom
being groomed
for the Lord of the fey
he gently removed my cloak
I turned & saw I now had wings
with sunshine in his eyes
he smiled at me saying
"my lady you belong to me
dance with me for all eternity
we are the guardians of the forest
when you were a lonely lass
thinking no one heard you I did
as you cavorted with nature
sleeping on mossy beds
with daisies adorning your hair
I fell in love with you
stay with me won't you?"
I smiled shyly at him
beheld his magical kingdom
& knew I was home
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 9th Apr 2017
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9th Apr 2017 9:55am
that's delicate poetry, Crim,
I see butterflys & the elven ones;
Tinkerbell too...
I see butterflys & the elven ones;
Tinkerbell too...
9th Apr 2017 10:03am
thank you John I have my softer side :) sometimes she whispers poetry to me.. love Crim
9th Apr 2017 10:18am
The trees keep our secrets,
give us shade, a place to rest and
are always there, listening quietly.
So beautiful, Crim, takes me back to the woods as I read...
give us shade, a place to rest and
are always there, listening quietly.
So beautiful, Crim, takes me back to the woods as I read...
9th Apr 2017 10:23am
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9th Apr 2017 12:31pm
A fairytale of the heart.❤
So that's how we know one another, we lived among the trees and their conduits communicated our existence of one to the other.
Trees are faithful.
Lovely work, Brenda.
So that's how we know one another, we lived among the trees and their conduits communicated our existence of one to the other.
Trees are faithful.
Lovely work, Brenda.
12th Apr 2017 2:46am
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9th Apr 2017 2:11pm
Wow...so awesome my friend! A very mystical n magical ride thru your talented mind :)
12th Apr 2017 2:47am
9th Apr 2017 2:32pm
What can I say that hasn't been said . . . Just a beautiful poem, beautifully done!
12th Apr 2017 2:48am
Anonymous
9th Apr 2017 5:19pm
Ah ... the Fey`s, my Queen
Such a tale woven in poetry.
Always a pleasure
to see your ventures
away from darkness ... ;)
~love you, Devlin
12th Apr 2017 2:49am
thank you my lovely Dark Queen yes my light side shines from time to time.. love you lady.. xo Brenda
9th Apr 2017 6:01pm
This is lovely and almost hypnotic.
we are the guardians of the forest
when you were a lonely lass
thinking no one heard you I did
Beautiful and enchanting. Thank you.
we are the guardians of the forest
when you were a lonely lass
thinking no one heard you I did
Beautiful and enchanting. Thank you.
12th Apr 2017 2:49am
9th Apr 2017 6:52pm
A dance of a poem - a once upon a time - a delightful tale -enjoyed this so very much - very different from the norm - different is good :-)
Love this :-)
Love this :-)
12th Apr 2017 2:51am
aw thank you David yes venturing a bit into different territory.. showing you a different side of me.. deep adore you show love for all of me.. love Brenda
Anonymous
10th Apr 2017 4:37am
I smell the flavor of nature on my palate and it is delightfully enlightening.
12th Apr 2017 2:52am
Anonymous
10th Apr 2017 1:49pm
What a captivating piece! I thoroughly enjoyed the way it was saturated with nature and magic. Beautiful, dark angel
12th Apr 2017 2:52am
12th Apr 2017 2:53am
Anonymous
10th Apr 2017 6:11pm
My Beautiful Brenda...there was a warm breeze which provided a lovely blanket around me as I was swept away and enchanted by the magically woven piece my love...gorgeous!
I love you!
xoxo Taryn
I love you!
xoxo Taryn
12th Apr 2017 2:54am
aw thank you my beautiful one my heart sings to know I for a moment could transport you here.. I love you deeply.. xo Brenda
