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Conversation: A wise tiger (Jade-Pandora) & a chirpy bird (KDAmB)

From the six word challenge collaboration with my endless friend KDAmB!
(KDAmB in regular font, me in italisized font)


mature should not
automatically mean old

I sure feel old right now

old indeed
is pure solid gold!

then surely
I'm a rich woman


who's ever denied
that very fact?

the midst of
my own storm


storms come storms go
you remain

my storm is
like Jupiter's eye


all eyes do close
one day

including one's third eye
always unseen


believing is seeing
and vice versa!

but some think seeing
confirms moreso


when in love
eyes don't matter

you have a point
about believing


faith and confidence
the two eyes

and the third
guides the two


that's why we meditate
eyes closed


This was fun, unwinding, working off stress, whatever each of us was doing there
at the 6 word challenge on the endless forum.  We decided to put our postings together
as a collaboration!
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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