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There I was, n' then There I Went...
"Just so happens
LIFE crashed
my creative party
n' of course not invited
yet made itself comfortable
makin' certain I wasn't...
Leavin' only After it
was certain it knew
I had become, in it's wake
a wreck unto myself...
A slight reprieve came
ONLY when BUD bein'
wiser...knew a temporary
escape felt necessary
n' suddenly the music
sounded a wee bit sweeter
n' I lost myself inside a
world of sports magic..."
LIFE crashed
my creative party
n' of course not invited
yet made itself comfortable
makin' certain I wasn't...
Leavin' only After it
was certain it knew
I had become, in it's wake
a wreck unto myself...
A slight reprieve came
ONLY when BUD bein'
wiser...knew a temporary
escape felt necessary
n' suddenly the music
sounded a wee bit sweeter
n' I lost myself inside a
world of sports magic..."
Published 4th Apr 2017
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4th Apr 2017 2:08pm
LOL! Great write. I heard Carolina rocked it! Of course I fell asleep! An NCCA Championship and I'm dreaming poetry.
#NoRegrets!
#NoRegrets!
4th Apr 2017 2:27pm
Yes, they did! N Yup me too! but I dvr-ed lol n reawoke to finish where I left off to the end! lol thank you for makin me smile n ur support :)
4th Apr 2017 3:52pm
5th Apr 2017 00:43am
Aaaaawww so is ur comment! Thank you my sweet Lil pudding cup, I'm honored n deeply grateful always :)
4th Apr 2017 5:22pm
Poe the ending made me smile :) happy something came your way today to put pen to paper..
love Crim
love Crim
5th Apr 2017 00:55am
Yea me too becuz before that it was pretty sad... but any who thank you sweetness...always :)
Anonymous
4th Apr 2017 6:43pm
You hooked me at music...and then I laughed at the sports magic. As long as you enjoyed it, that's what's important! Great job!
5th Apr 2017 00:56am
Yea that's true...I'm just happy it ended better than it started :) big thanks my dear Ash. :)
5th Apr 2017 6:37am
Lol the whole damn time I was reading this I thought it was a serious poem on a serious subject.... then that last line had me cracking up! You got me! Nice!
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5th Apr 2017 9:31am
I'm happy you enjoyed this at the expense of my pain lol jk... but Yea, as they say shit happens huh? lol thank you my sweet Goddess, always :)
