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Touch
it breathes
inside my well-worn jeans
gathering strength
because you are oh!
so desirable
your longing gaze refuses to look
even though
we both know the score
it has a feeling of social importance
damn!
trying to burst through
threadbare jeans
you are so hot
passionate to your very core
growing wild with desire
touch, but don't look
İMarch 28, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
inside my well-worn jeans
gathering strength
because you are oh!
so desirable
your longing gaze refuses to look
even though
we both know the score
it has a feeling of social importance
damn!
trying to burst through
threadbare jeans
you are so hot
passionate to your very core
growing wild with desire
touch, but don't look
İMarch 28, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Published 29th Mar 2017
| Edited 30th Mar 2017
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29th Mar 2017 4:00pm
Jerry this made me giggle at the end how could a woman resist to look but not touch you :)
wonderful..
love Brenda
wonderful..
love Brenda
Heh.Heh Then it served its point, Brenda, and I appreciate you found it humorous. Thank you very much.
Anonymous
29th Mar 2017 8:02pm
Loved the last line especially! The build-up was perfect. Big smiles...but I woulda been peeking for sure...just saying
Thanks Ash . . . Yeah, I have to admit most of us would very definitely look. Appreciate your comments.
because you are oh!
That line! It's so powerful, Jerry, that I almost want to suggest that you replace the following line with a space. Because oh! It's that powerful!
That line! It's so powerful, Jerry, that I almost want to suggest that you replace the following line with a space. Because oh! It's that powerful!
Interesting Ahavati, because when I wrote that line I felt the need to give a space between it and the next line, which I shall do after I get through here. Thank you for reading my mind.
Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 00:48am
Jerry this caused me a giggle...bringing it as usual with that ending!! Stellar!! Sorry I have been absent...again I'm trying to get on track!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
30th Mar 2017 1:24am
Taryn, I understand completely the need you have to take care of things on your end. Please take care of yourself above anything else, especially the poetry posts. Thank you much for your presence, but please concentrate on your well being.
Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 1:26am
I will. I promise. Thank you my friend. 💋
30th Mar 2017 2:28am
Hey Jerry.....this is such a teasing ink......you're so dang clever my friend......this made smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Mar 2017 2:37am
Heh.Heh Ah, so happy I got a smile on that beautiful face, my dear friend, flower. Thank you very much for your read and so cool comments, I appreciate them very much.
Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 3:54am
This made me smile and maybe it's double fold because I actually got caught looking the other day lol.. thank you for the nice thoughts..
Anonymous
1st Apr 2017 2:31am
No I had to behave it was a client lol...
31st Mar 2017 9:39pm
1st Apr 2017 2:46am
I'm pleased that you found that line to be special. And I thank you very much, my friend.
