My Suicide

Heart breaking! This poem has a great flow to it👍

Thank you Danny.  Was a difficult write...

Excellent, well-sculpted write. I enjoyed this.

I appreciate the feedback. Thank you.

Heartbreaking and it happens too often

Yes it does and it is a shame...I think that is why I am an advocate for mental health. The pain left to process after is deep-rooted in those that have lost someone in such a tragic manner.

Captures plainly the 'psychology' of such a tragedy.

Thank you Josh.  I was difficult to write. I recently had a friend that took his own life...Often times people see it as selfish or weak...I had to process from his perspective.

Thankfully I saw the competition notice... becuz I didn't wanna be forced into killing you for killing urself! Lol :)

Awe... Thank you.  I have a dark side but I have outlets and support.  I think my empathy for those I love outweighs my despair and my experiences afford me the ability to believe I will come out on the other side and into the light once again.

excellent and very direct to the reader - I found myself ticking boxes as I read - very sad :-(

excellent and very direct to the reader - I found myself ticking boxes as I read - very sad :-(

Very moving poem and must have been difficult to write.

It was quite difficult.  I am a huge advocate for mental health awareness. I truly appreciate your support!  Much love.

Mental Health is definitely something we all should be aware of and great that you are a huge advocate for it.  You have my support.

Pretty darn good with excellent rhyming. Very nice