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moment you're free
The moment you stand up to tyranny
is the moment you actually become free
Falling in love with status quo is quite easy
for who doesn't hate chaos, love stability?
Freedom resides within your heart never surrender
You are free no matter how deep a ground you're under!
Live free or die trying? can't be more wrong
dying trying is dying free actually dying strong!
Copyright © KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
Published 27th Mar 2017
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You have covered it all, KDAmB, Living free! The only way to be . . .
31st Mar 2017 11:40am
Welcome Dear friend Jerry! ☺ Welcome your presence and hell yeah, the only way to be. I thank you sincerely thank the feedback my friend. Cheers 🍻
27th Mar 2017 4:44pm
That's true ... millennia of tyranny is slowly coming to be seen for what it has always been ... and only so through the courageous actions of ordinary people. Each stanza makes a perfected point
31st Mar 2017 11:43am
Welcome dear friend Josh! Appreciate deeply your presence and generous appreciation. Glad my scribble was able to convey my thoughts. Yes, the days of tyranny indeed are numbered, always have been, but personally think it's taken far too long. Kind regards KDAmB
Anonymous
27th Mar 2017 10:10pm
Yes, there is that moment
when one does find their self
at its crossroads,
and the choice one makes
echos in the ever after of it ...
upbeat & inspirational ... Definitely!
~love to you, KD, Devlin
31st Mar 2017 12:06pm
Welcome dear Lady Dev! Yes, the choices we make indeed reverberate. But, the time we stand up and make a choice truly counts. I welcome your presence and generous appreciation my honored friend. Thank you so much!! ☺ Warm regards KDAmB
28th Mar 2017 1:46am
I wish I could post that photo of Julia Roberts in "Pretty Woman" at the polo match going "oO! oO! oO!"
Cuz I would!
Cuz I would!
31st Mar 2017 12:24pm
My oh my!! Welcome Dear Sage One!! Looked up that scene and burst into laughter. Needless to say am humbled by your appreciation. Always welcome your presence and feedback dear friend. Thank You so much indeed!! Cheers KDAmB
28th Mar 2017 7:17pm
Very powerful message n the truth...your words.. loved the very first verse.the essence of essence!
"The moment you stand up to tyranny
is the moment you actually become free"
'freedom' seems taking the opportunistic definitions in those tinted glasses of soulless eyes ..your light is sunshine
this poem will stand anywhr anytime ..pure, brave n core truth.
tq fr the read:)
"The moment you stand up to tyranny
is the moment you actually become free"
'freedom' seems taking the opportunistic definitions in those tinted glasses of soulless eyes ..your light is sunshine
this poem will stand anywhr anytime ..pure, brave n core truth.
tq fr the read:)
31st Mar 2017 1:04pm
Welcome dear friend! ☺ Glad to see your presence and humbled by your such kind appreciation as well as the honour of the RL add. I thank you sincerely for all of the above. Your insight is indeed admirable. Thank You so much indeed. Kind regards KDAmB
29th Mar 2017 1:43am
a Thoughtful write, certainly awakened my grey matter - some people die miserable death because choice has been taken away - I just mention that for balance :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
5th Apr 2017 9:37pm
Welcome Dear Friend Dave! true, yes, in some cases choice indeed is taken away-a sad reality indeed. I welcome your visit and apt insight and always appreciate your generous appreciation dear Friend! Thank You so much for your support! Kind regards KDAmB
11th May 2017 1:19pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
