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Muse Fatale
He adores her fatal ways
Her style as she strokes his gun
Stepping back when he goes off
Catching his last angry shot
He discovers peace of mind
Recovery from another war
But she regrets libido lost
That which rendered her a whore
She crosses him, disturbs his peace
Coaxing him to new release
Those sorrows disinclined to drown
She laughs and swallows them right down.
Her style as she strokes his gun
Stepping back when he goes off
Catching his last angry shot
He discovers peace of mind
Recovery from another war
But she regrets libido lost
That which rendered her a whore
She crosses him, disturbs his peace
Coaxing him to new release
Those sorrows disinclined to drown
She laughs and swallows them right down.
Published 25th Mar 2017
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25th Mar 2017 9:39pm
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25th Mar 2017 10:51pm
Mo Chara, Crow....this one is infused with intriguing innuendos--indeed!
Quite the seductress, your muse....but, darkly detrimental--perhaps-- over time?????
A stirring scribe!
Quite the seductress, your muse....but, darkly detrimental--perhaps-- over time?????
A stirring scribe!
26th Mar 2017 9:39pm
I haven't thought about the danger, patsy that I am. I do know she's habit-forming. Thanks Enchantress!
26th Mar 2017 00:49am
Sensual read, Crow and the flow in this one is amazing...
Perfect picture to accompany this piece!
Perfect picture to accompany this piece!
26th Mar 2017 9:42pm
Thanks Duende I tried to find some info so I could give a credit for that pic but couldn't find anything, no photographer's or model's name. Oh well. She is a beauty though, no?
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27th Mar 2017 3:27am
Witty turn of Word Crow...This played with a smile at the same time delivering the sensual-Quite Wicked Good Sir!!!
1st Apr 2017 9:00pm
I love puns and word play and fight the urge to overdo it. I'm glad you enjoyed the shenanigans. Thanks soul!
1st Apr 2017 8:53pm
I love the word play and smiled through reading it all. Very titillating.. as she swallows it down ;) xo
1st Apr 2017 9:04pm
If it's fun to read that's all I ask. I get a kick out of Ms. Fatale myself. No gag reflex at all!;) ox
