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Thoughts Are Unsaid Words

Thoughts Are Unsaid Words

Thoughts Are Unsaid Words

I spend a lot of time thinking
About you
How we met
The way you made me feel
I noticed you
You saw me
Hidden language
Subtle movements
You fired my curiosity
I saw you needed something
Words seemed inadequate
My thoughts however were clear
Maybe fear prevented me from speaking out
Thoughts felt safe in my head
So you never heard what I was thinking
I regret that
In future I will be more open
Tell you my thoughts
No more hidden language
Second guessing as we dance around each other
I love you in my head and my heart
Always have and always will
You are an incredible lady and a sensational wife

Written by firemonkey

Published 24th Mar 2017

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Re. Thoughts Are Unsaid Words

mel44 (Melgar)

26th Mar 2017 3:09pm

Lovely dedication. Being vulnerable with are thoughts can sometimes feel like torture...but without a doubt, when we find the courage, it offers true intimacy. Thank you for your words.

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Re. Thoughts Are Unsaid Words

DomistLoral

27th Mar 2017 10:38am

Thoughts and words are so powerful in a relationship. they are a required evil that can make or break it. good reason to be scared. I loved the way you put it, dancing around each other in hits of what they were actually thinking.