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Insanity
wild are his steps
with a feral growl
& blood on his lips
he hunts the night
caged for so long
he will not go easy
beauty becomes him
his name is sin
sweet & deadly
carnal in nature
he shakes foundations
darkness and grief
thieves of the mind
enter him at will
midnight his chaser
with a heroin, meth mix
coursing through his veins
he is an indestructible savage
he pulls on the stitches of reality
forces wills to bend to his own
hear the cry of the damned & fear
wild are his steps
with a feral growl
& blood on his lips
he hunts the night
tremble the madman approaches
wear your demons as a talisman
to ward against the one
who stalks hell its self
deranged & insane
caged for so long
he will not go easy
beauty becomes him
his name is sin
sweet & deadly
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 23rd Mar 2017
| Edited 24th Mar 2017
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Anonymous
23rd Mar 2017 6:10am
`Sweet & Deadly`
is this piece, My ally in Darkness.
Such addictions
do create such poetic
masterpieces; it`s hard
to resist, not even the
talisman can compete.
Insane ink, Woman.
~love you, Devlin
Anonymous
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23rd Mar 2017 6:30am
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23rd Mar 2017 6:34am
black is the color of vampiric poetry, Crim;
no matter how sweet & deadly,
nothing belongs in a cage...
no matter how sweet & deadly,
nothing belongs in a cage...
23rd Mar 2017 6:41am
Such beauty in darkness,
touching places the light could never reach,
but only envy.
Another fine write, talented lady...
touching places the light could never reach,
but only envy.
Another fine write, talented lady...
23rd Mar 2017 9:05am
Dark poetry like only you can write it, dear Crim
You nailed 'addiction' with this one!
Outstanding write...
Love, Duende
You nailed 'addiction' with this one!
Outstanding write...
Love, Duende
23rd Mar 2017 10:00am
Is it crazy to love this insane ink??
I think not, therefore I WILL! lol
Outstanding work my sweet Crim....
I think not, therefore I WILL! lol
Outstanding work my sweet Crim....
23rd Mar 2017 12:07pm
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2017 2:17pm
I love the shadowed alleys you lead us through. Beauty in the darkness. Very much enjoyed, dark angel
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2017 6:28pm
My enriched love. I love this
23rd Mar 2017 8:31pm
The allure...is it no wonder why so many fall prey.
A twisting Write You Pen -The dark slithers!!!
A twisting Write You Pen -The dark slithers!!!
24th Mar 2017 4:11am
Sin is sweet and deadly, but I like to imagine sin as a mighty fine lady 😎 Hehe
Wonderful write, Crim 🤗
Wonderful write, Crim 🤗
24th Mar 2017 4:35pm
A man to be feared and worshipped in equal measure methinks :-)
excellent atmospheric write - loved it :-)
excellent atmospheric write - loved it :-)
24th Mar 2017 8:04pm
Why is "its'self" written that way? That gripe aside, I enjoyed this poem, which makes me think of the Florence + the Machine song "Howl". It's a neat and evocative portrait of a mythic, Gothic figure.
24th Mar 2017 9:18pm
I thought that looked wrong too Jack lol thank you for making me sure it was wrong :) I deeply appreciate your thoughts on this write my friend.. love Brenda
25th Mar 2017 1:24am
Brenda.. this is very much lyrics.. i love when you go there.. you need someone to put music to your ink.. truly brilliant, lovely one.. love..
Dave
Dave
25th Mar 2017 4:54am
It will always call to us and in our weakest moments we may abandon our path and go insane!
25th Mar 2017 9:54pm
I love how you personify sin. He (or she) is sweet, deadly and endlessly seductive. Insanity is falling into their trap once again, just like countless times before. I count myself a repeat offender. Fine work Lady Crim!
27th Mar 2017 6:42pm
28th Mar 2017 7:11am
I see myself in every line, that's insanity and glad to be a member of like minded,,,,er, well u know
29th Mar 2017 6:57am
I read it 3 times, why I tried to fit it into a neat sensible thing when it's insanity rising imperceptible, a gentle slope, subtle , then ,,,well, I agree
Anonymous
11th Apr 2017 00:20am
As I have always said Lovely One, there is stunning beauty in both dark and light and you show us its allure in these lines...outstanding piece my love!
I love you!!
xoxo Taryn
I love you!!
xoxo Taryn
