Quando la struttura morta

when structure is dead
nothing defines the outlines
where mem'ry exists

escaping beyond borders
beyond life where we find truth

you slumber deeply
between my sleeplessness as
night passes over

never touched before, nor now
and not endlessly later

A Rensaku = linked Tanka
Title in Italian means "When the structure is dead".
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