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Exploitation
Why should her exploitation be confined,
She thinks, to discipline across a desk?
Why not her mouth as well? It is inclined
To take his cock - when flavoured it is best..
Sweet residue! Her cute, cuntal divide
Will yield and get her all these just desserts;
The fiend (so eagerly) in her presides
Over this cocktail of his semen spurts;
She enjoys every sip - the heady brew
Encourages a blush across her face
As she leans forward ready for the screw
She's earned by finding herself in sub-space;
When placed as she's accustomed, she can find
Excitement that can rarely be confined.
She thinks, to discipline across a desk?
Why not her mouth as well? It is inclined
To take his cock - when flavoured it is best..
Sweet residue! Her cute, cuntal divide
Will yield and get her all these just desserts;
The fiend (so eagerly) in her presides
Over this cocktail of his semen spurts;
She enjoys every sip - the heady brew
Encourages a blush across her face
As she leans forward ready for the screw
She's earned by finding herself in sub-space;
When placed as she's accustomed, she can find
Excitement that can rarely be confined.
Published 18th Mar 2017
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18th Mar 2017 10:59am
OK, it's sexy, has a beginning and end... but poetic it is not.
Bring long sentences down, and try to make a rhythmic flow to your endeavor.
Bring long sentences down, and try to make a rhythmic flow to your endeavor.
I note your honesty, and am very glad you found the verses sexy.
I'm sorry that you find ten syllable verses too long to get your head round, from a poetic perspective.
You did make me think and I have broken it up into the respective stanzas to make it less like a block of text. So thank you for that too.
This verse form is called a Shakesperian sonnet. You may not have heard of this, but It is traditionally written in iambic pentameter of 10 syllables with 3 four line rhyming stanzas and an envoi couplet.
The rhythm is formed by given stresses; and the stanzas can be elided as needed by enjambments.between them
Hope this helps you as you learn more about poetry here. Thank you for your contribution to mine.
I'm sorry that you find ten syllable verses too long to get your head round, from a poetic perspective.
You did make me think and I have broken it up into the respective stanzas to make it less like a block of text. So thank you for that too.
This verse form is called a Shakesperian sonnet. You may not have heard of this, but It is traditionally written in iambic pentameter of 10 syllables with 3 four line rhyming stanzas and an envoi couplet.
The rhythm is formed by given stresses; and the stanzas can be elided as needed by enjambments.between them
Hope this helps you as you learn more about poetry here. Thank you for your contribution to mine.
18th Mar 2017 2:06pm
17th Apr 2017 9:40pm
18th Mar 2017 2:09pm
as always i am mesmerized by your poetry
today however i find a deeper appreciation
just by reading your response to the first comment
which confirms what i admittedly knew of myself..
i am not a true poet..
i knew nothing of this kind of format [ Shakesperian sonnet. ]
upon re-reading i now have a clear understanding of your rhyme
schemes which you employ
nothing casual in the least ...you are adhering to the strictest of confines
while being equally expressive and creative
thank you for the inadvertent lesson
much respect
today however i find a deeper appreciation
just by reading your response to the first comment
which confirms what i admittedly knew of myself..
i am not a true poet..
i knew nothing of this kind of format [ Shakesperian sonnet. ]
upon re-reading i now have a clear understanding of your rhyme
schemes which you employ
nothing casual in the least ...you are adhering to the strictest of confines
while being equally expressive and creative
thank you for the inadvertent lesson
much respect
Thank you - I admit that I am sometimes too trapped in form and use it far too much as a prop.
I always find the envoi couplet of a sonnet incredibly hard - it is so easy to throw it away with a quick rhyme or to revert to the initial statement. Unfortunately this can mean the verse becomes meaningless sliver of cold filling in a tasteless sandwich - I hope my revisions have sort of answered the initial question posed - maybe I have been trite - I don't know.
In truth I really wish I had the skill of some here who are inspired to write so superbly in free verse - smiles
I always find the envoi couplet of a sonnet incredibly hard - it is so easy to throw it away with a quick rhyme or to revert to the initial statement. Unfortunately this can mean the verse becomes meaningless sliver of cold filling in a tasteless sandwich - I hope my revisions have sort of answered the initial question posed - maybe I have been trite - I don't know.
In truth I really wish I had the skill of some here who are inspired to write so superbly in free verse - smiles
