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super absorbent
a curse-like gift
a gift-like curse
through nature or nurture
the human condition persists
varying in degrees of inheritances
as decrees passed down
through the channels of fate
...
dietary needs may differ
from soul to soul
from experience
through experimentation
trial and error...and error...and error
seeking cohesive grains
through the constant culling
of calcified thoughts
...
may require a mercy killing
the sacrificing of decayed ideologies
that delusional thinking
detrimental to the mental
update outdated philosophies
they must always be in movement
because there's an abundance
of evidence of how time
punishes the stagnant
Published 14th Mar 2017
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14th Mar 2017 12:16pm
I really enjoyed the essence of this, Naajir. That ending leaves a hush in the spirit for an echo from the future.
Life goes on and the stagnant are absorbed as an abandoned house by nature over time.
Life goes on and the stagnant are absorbed as an abandoned house by nature over time.
My brother, such is the life of a free thinker and philosopher, as we live and grow in age we learn or relearn, dispell myths we once held as truths, evolve and expand in new understanding BECAUSE we refuse to take things at face value or be herded like the rest of the "sheeple" to a complacent corral. We are as we have always been, the voice of the few; warriors. Keep that pen flowing!
Peace, love and light
Red
Peace, love and light
Red
Anonymous
14th Mar 2017 3:11pm
When you deliver a message, you do so clearly and with definite style. Very much enjoyed this one! Much respect to your pen
15th Mar 2017 9:25pm
Yes, I agree with all the commentary here bro.... it's outstanding, thought provoking
stuff n as usual I'm in awe of your talent....:)
stuff n as usual I'm in awe of your talent....:)
18th Mar 2017 00:07am
I love that you seemed to have so solidly found your style, your significant voice. you sign sentences that strike the soul and remind me why I find pleasure in poetry. THANK YOU - its great to watch u grow..curtsy bow, you inspire..
