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Pleasured Appraisals
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Closing the door
silence soft in
growing status
Blinds of a beautiful mind
pulled shut to the world
outside
I know nothing of the
breathing cycle of many
Just you heard
As I, (within the cusp of
your falling, that'll bring
you in me with pleasured
appraisals)
Fall into rhythmic rhymes
Closing the door
silence soft in
growing status
Blinds of a beautiful mind
pulled shut to the world
outside
I know nothing of the
breathing cycle of many
Just you heard
As I, (within the cusp of
your falling, that'll bring
you in me with pleasured
appraisals)
Fall into rhythmic rhymes
Published 12th Mar 2017
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12th Mar 2017 3:02pm
I loved the soft ambiguous pattern and sprinkled alliteration patting the form like rain, Rose. 🌷
12th Mar 2017 4:21pm
Beautifully soft and subtle like a whisper. The flow breathes new life into this piece. Well done, Rose
24th Mar 2017 5:09am
