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Vows
When did I love you become a lie?
Why did you promise and then not try?
When I need you most, unaccompanied I cry.
All that you offered, you now deny.
You left me alone, without goodbye.
You clipped my wings, I cannot fly.
I’ll seek not to trust nor care to try.
You betrayed your promise, left me to die.
Why did you promise and then not try?
When I need you most, unaccompanied I cry.
All that you offered, you now deny.
You left me alone, without goodbye.
You clipped my wings, I cannot fly.
I’ll seek not to trust nor care to try.
You betrayed your promise, left me to die.
Published 9th Mar 2017
| Edited 10th Mar 2017
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9th Mar 2017 6:26pm
Oh, I'm so sorry...I know of that pain. Why do people change? or is it us that changes??
10th Mar 2017 3:49am
Love is thee most torturous of all. With it we take it for granted and with out it we are worthless. Im all in either way Im all in. Nicely done here. <3
11th Mar 2017 8:36pm
10th Mar 2017 9:08am
The pain of realizing love often
doesn't often lead to a "happy everafter"
can sadly become the catalyst for those who decide having love ain't worth it...
doesn't often lead to a "happy everafter"
can sadly become the catalyst for those who decide having love ain't worth it...
11th Mar 2017 8:38pm
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19th Mar 2017 7:49pm
I want to cry. Absolutely painful. Wonderfully written.
19th Mar 2017 10:30pm
