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Hidden Treasure
you are an outstretched hand
helping me across
lonely stones
you are a reassuring voice
always telling me
I’m not alone
you are the hidden treasure
that my heart
has never known
©March 2, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
helping me across
lonely stones
you are a reassuring voice
always telling me
I’m not alone
you are the hidden treasure
that my heart
has never known
©March 2, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
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8th Mar 2017 5:12pm
Re. Hidden Treasure
8th Mar 2017 3:17am
Awe Jerry......this absolutely made my heart feel warm and happy........such sensual simple words that touch deep within the heart.......BRAVO my friend........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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8th Mar 2017 5:18pm
Re. Hidden Treasure
Anonymous
8th Mar 2017 5:52am
Well dammit Jerry!! This has me just filled with the warmest of fuzzies...what a lovely sentiment sent out to someone done so powerfully with the fewest of words...so well done! Bravo!!!!! (she claps hands repeatedly blowing kisses in your direction!!!)
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re. Hidden Treasure
8th Mar 2017 11:37pm
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Thank you very much for your cool comments concerning my poem, Ahavati.
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9th Mar 2017 1:50am