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Poetic Lovers
I read his words in black and white
His love for me blew my mind
Am I really all he sees me to be
Beautiful rainbows in the night?
His words are deep and full of life
Hope and sorrow rolled into one
Could his love set me free
Am I worthy of such a glorious gift
His love for me blew my mind
Am I really all he sees me to be
Beautiful rainbows in the night?
His words are deep and full of life
Hope and sorrow rolled into one
Could his love set me free
Am I worthy of such a glorious gift
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Re. Poetic Lovers
7th Mar 2017 11:27pm
Re. Poetic Lovers
8th Mar 2017 7:37am
Still my favorite.
As Rare as a Rainbow in the night.
Welcome to DUP .... expecting some awesome stuff from you.
As Rare as a Rainbow in the night.
Welcome to DUP .... expecting some awesome stuff from you.
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Re. Poetic Lovers
9th Mar 2017 2:01pm
I, too, am intrigued by "Beautiful rainbows in the night"
guess all things are possible when it comes to poetic love
guess all things are possible when it comes to poetic love
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Re. Poetic Lovers
9th Mar 2017 2:09pm
Thank you for commenting mysticstones - "ALL things ARE possible when it comes to poetic love"
Re. Poetic Lovers
17th Mar 2017 4:47pm
Hey Miz.....isn't it wonderful to read luv that's meant for just you.....a very touching ink that relate to so very much......awesome......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Poetic Lovers
20th Mar 2017 5:13am
Thank you for your comments flowergirl. It is very humbling when someone loves you like this, with no expectations. Glittery hugs right back at you.
Re. Poetic Lovers
22nd Mar 2017 1:41am
a great question that only you can answer :-)
excellent ink - liked much :-)
excellent ink - liked much :-)
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Re: Re. Poetic Lovers
22nd Mar 2017 5:15am
Very true David_Macleod....only I can answer that. Thank you for taking time to pop in and read my words and appreciate your comments. Have a beautiful day.
Re. Poetic Lovers
22nd Mar 2017 10:14am
Short but so very sweet...look at you getting all that affection! :)... nice ink
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22nd Mar 2017 11:31am
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25th Mar 2017 3:44am
My least favorite lines were lines 2 and 6. Yet I like the sense of exciting mystery presented through your questions.
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27th Mar 2017 7:25am
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