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Oceans Depths
where luv breathes
in silence is when
I feel you the most
touching my skin
with thoughts of luving
when the moon glows
laying inside your hug
under our blanket of luv
sharing a cozy moment
all is silent except imagination
our spirits join together
in deep depths of the ocean
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
in silence is when
I feel you the most
touching my skin
with thoughts of luving
when the moon glows
laying inside your hug
under our blanket of luv
sharing a cozy moment
all is silent except imagination
our spirits join together
in deep depths of the ocean
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Oceans Depths
3rd Mar 2017 2:08am
First, that image is stunning. Secondly, that first verse is breathtaking. The rest was the dive after the crest.
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3rd Mar 2017 2:17am
Hey Ahavati.........thank you so much for the blessing of your humbling words......I truly felt awesome writing this one.......I'm so glad you liked it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Oceans Depths
3rd Mar 2017 3:27am
Fantastic wordplay throughout this short, but sensuous poem of desire and the fulfillment of that desire. Very well articulated. Loved it very much.
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3rd Mar 2017 3:37am
Awe Jerry.......so glad you enjoyed this......happy that simple and short worked with this one.......thank you for the uplifting words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2017 4:03am
Beautiful Sun KIssed, as always...love shines off the page even within the hues of an evening moon...beautiful...With Love - Sweet S xo :)
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Re: Re. Oceans Depths
3rd Mar 2017 4:11am
Hey Sweet S........thank you for your graceful words you leave for me......appreciate your smile upon my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Oceans Depths
3rd Mar 2017 6:12am
"all is silent except imagination" > this line speaks volumes!
Such a sensual and beautiful poem, dear flowergirl...
Love, Duende
Such a sensual and beautiful poem, dear flowergirl...
Love, Duende
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Re: Re. Oceans Depths
6th Mar 2017 3:03am
Hey Duende......you always make me smile with your comments you leave me......I'm so happy you flet this one.......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Mar 2017 3:37am
Hey Leroy.....thank you for your visit upon my page.......I'm glad you liked.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Oceans Depths
3rd Mar 2017 7:59am
G this is totally beautiful visually and emotionally. Makes me want to sink into your wings of water and swim within your luv... and you picked the perfect image to adorn your portrait of tranquility...
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. Oceans Depths
6th Mar 2017 3:42am
Hey JJ........beautiful words you leave me.......wow......when I first read them I just sat here reading them over and over.......feelng how beautiful they are......thank you......souls like you are why i stay here......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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8th Mar 2017 10:10pm
I get that feeling for leaving here every now and then but I have some very special friends here that I never want to lose, you among them. I hope you never go, but you can always call me to keep in touch... JJ
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Re: Re. Oceans Depths
11th Mar 2017 10:32pm
Awe JJ......you're friendship is priceless......thank you for the thoughtfulness.......you're a blessing.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Oceans Depths
3rd Mar 2017 8:11am
I salute the Poetry Man for his comment
No I don't lament
no one on my silly sexy works comment
but sis you
your purple hue
is extraordinary too
and
hopefully
some day
one day
some one
will read me too
like they all do you
but my tinge of sexy ones
get many reads
but rarely a comment in need
to satisfy my greed
simple poetry not many read
as I have no following
But that's a different story
I am glad to see so many read thee
RL this please
purply
No I don't lament
no one on my silly sexy works comment
but sis you
your purple hue
is extraordinary too
and
hopefully
some day
one day
some one
will read me too
like they all do you
but my tinge of sexy ones
get many reads
but rarely a comment in need
to satisfy my greed
simple poetry not many read
as I have no following
But that's a different story
I am glad to see so many read thee
RL this please
purply
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Re: Re. Oceans Depths
6th Mar 2017 3:44am
Hey Peot Bro.....thank you for this ink......shows an awesome side of you.....honried for you sharing this with me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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14th Aug 2017 5:37pm
i share but with rare sis purple you always will be none can ever you miss ur purple poetry is one in a class worth etching in glass
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Re. Oceans Depths
3rd Mar 2017 12:37pm
Such a strong loving feel to this read. Looking on special moments.
Great work 😁
Great work 😁
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Re: Re. Oceans Depths
6th Mar 2017 3:46am
Awe LK.....thank you for stoppng my way.....appreciate the smile upon my ink......glad you enjoyed....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Oceans Depths
6th Mar 2017 7:53am
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7th Mar 2017 2:54am
Hey Miz.....I luv nature.....it always speak luv if we listen.....thank you for "WOW".....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Mar 2017 1:27pm
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7th Mar 2017 2:58am
Awe David.....I'm very honored by your bow.....bowing back to you with respect and smiles......thank you for making my night.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Oceans Depths
8th Mar 2017 4:14am
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11th Mar 2017 10:39pm
Hey X....I'm so happy to always see your smile upon my ink.....glad you enjoyed this......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)