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Aurora
Aurora,
I know you play games.
I'm aware of your style,
but I've come calling again.
As we touch,
your caress sparks my flame.
The soft allure ,
I'm helpless as a paper crane.
My lovely,
as colourful as an icy sprinkle.
Soft like jelly on the inside;
your shell as hard as a periwinkle.
As the sun kisses the early bird,
I await your unspoken word.
I hear only lovely sounds
as your walls fall down.
Your sweet solace,
fills my empty plate.
In sorrow,
we are no longer irate.
My darling,
such a bittersweet vice.
To hold your companionship,
I must pay the price.
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Re. Aurora
1st Mar 2017 6:55am
"To hold your companionship,
I must pay the price."
Too true, I feel this. Nice write
I must pay the price."
Too true, I feel this. Nice write
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Re: Re. Aurora
12th Mar 2017 2:06am
It gives me such a feeling of warmth and satisfaction that my words have struck a cord in you, Alyssa. Many thanks, darling. (:
Re. Aurora
1st Mar 2017 7:33am
Re: Re. Aurora
12th Mar 2017 2:04am
Much gratitude, my dearest Rose. I admire many of your poems and I am sincerely flattered you took the time to comment. (:
Re: Re. Aurora
12th Mar 2017 2:02am
I appreciate you taking the time to comment on my work. Many thanks, darling Kavik. (;
Re. Aurora
Beautiful writing! Congratulations on your 'Dysfunctional Relationship' competition win LostGirl18!
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Re. Aurora
11th Mar 2017 7:27pm
Re. Aurora
Anonymous
17th Apr 2017 11:10am
That's about right
"My darling,
such a bittersweet vice.
To hold your companionship,
I must pay the price."
this whole piece necessary,
then your twisted ending left
me stunned.
Ha, oh yes..there's always
a price
"My darling,
such a bittersweet vice.
To hold your companionship,
I must pay the price."
this whole piece necessary,
then your twisted ending left
me stunned.
Ha, oh yes..there's always
a price
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
17th Aug 2019 6:53pm
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Re: Re. Aurora
17th Aug 2019 11:11pm
I'm always guessing what the end will be.
Aren't we all? (;
Surprise!
Yours,
LostGirl
Aren't we all? (;
Surprise!
Yours,
LostGirl
Re. Aurora
7th Mar 2024 6:16pm
"My lovely,
as colourful as an icy sprinkle.
Soft like jelly on the inside;
your shell as hard as a periwinkle."
Loved the stanza, exquisite spill.
as colourful as an icy sprinkle.
Soft like jelly on the inside;
your shell as hard as a periwinkle."
Loved the stanza, exquisite spill.
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