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Chasing the Rainbow
Let’s chase the sun
to the arms that fold it in
let’s seek the warmth
and the arms that embrace it
Let’s seek the mystic mountain
where snow falls in white beauty
the cold yet welcoming love
from withered gardens beneath
maybe we can find the meaning of our life
written on a stone somewhere
in the middle of this earth
to the east of the moon
maybe we can touch the stars
so we can whisper our thoughts and desires
up close to its sparkly points
but will it grant our wishes...
maybe if we just keep on seeking
faith may kiss destiny and allow
us to meet our own perfection
as in our dreams
lets just keep seeking
the land within the mists
of fantasy and waking dreams
maybe we will find perfect love there
will I know when I see it
…it’s a place paradise is made of
If it is, I will stretch out my hands
and guide you…so you can come too.
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Re. Chasing the Rainbow
26th Feb 2017 4:30am
Gorgeous piece of poetry, Grace. Love the fantastical feel I get from it.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. Chasing the Rainbow
26th Feb 2017 6:34am
and you anonshadow is my encouragement, with your kind words and constant reading of me.:) thank you!
Re. Chasing the Rainbow
26th Feb 2017 10:34am
A bouquet of radiant imagery that expresses love through the dimensional veil between reality and imagination... beautifully expressed Grace!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. Chasing the Rainbow
26th Feb 2017 2:12pm
If only one can actually touch that perfect happiness eh, Poetryman.:) thank you for reading me as always. I appreciate you.
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26th Feb 2017 12:40pm
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Re. Chasing the Rainbow
26th Feb 2017 5:34pm
I love the wisdom and encompassing spirituality to this. My favorite lines:
maybe if we just keep on seeking
faith may kiss destiny and allow
us to meet our own perfection
as in our dreams
Pure magic, Grace! Let me know when you find Paradise....
maybe if we just keep on seeking
faith may kiss destiny and allow
us to meet our own perfection
as in our dreams
Pure magic, Grace! Let me know when you find Paradise....
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Re: Re. Chasing the Rainbow
26th Feb 2017 11:24pm
Dear Crowfly:) as always you honour me with your encouraging comments. Thank you for reading me...and if I find paradise you will be in my guest list.
Re. Chasing the Rainbow
27th Feb 2017 3:32am
Let us just keep seeking...
The essence of hope is the belief there is something to seek.
Beautiful, Grace.
The essence of hope is the belief there is something to seek.
Beautiful, Grace.
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Re: Re. Chasing the Rainbow
27th Feb 2017 7:41am
Perfection is so illusive dear Ahavati:) seeking will take forever...thanks so much for reading me.
Re. Chasing the Rainbow
28th Feb 2017 10:50am
Dreamer seeks fellow dreamer for a hot date and no perspiration. Super constituents for a lucid dream or two. Master of the double entendre as well. Top marks kid.
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Re: Re. Chasing the Rainbow
28th Feb 2017 11:20am
It may well turn into a meeting of inspiration, Terry. Thank you for being there and reading me as always.
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