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Could Of Been
times change
every wind
brings promise
stripped away
do a shot
snort the line
crushed pills
another nightcap
cigarette burns
inhaled deep
call an escort
room 666
she knocks
on hollow door
conversing
over business
we exchange
glances
evil stare
skin bare
legal tender
erotic lady
paid in full
calls me mister
so seductive
mind is hard
but i’m short
dick is soft
party foul
suicide
cocktail
called regret
i taste her
going down
confused
she’s lost
why would
i do that
because
she’s human
and i’m a
shadow
of what
could of been
every wind
brings promise
stripped away
do a shot
snort the line
crushed pills
another nightcap
cigarette burns
inhaled deep
call an escort
room 666
she knocks
on hollow door
conversing
over business
we exchange
glances
evil stare
skin bare
legal tender
erotic lady
paid in full
calls me mister
so seductive
mind is hard
but i’m short
dick is soft
party foul
suicide
cocktail
called regret
i taste her
going down
confused
she’s lost
why would
i do that
because
she’s human
and i’m a
shadow
of what
could of been
Published 25th Feb 2017
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Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 9:21pm
Wow!
This is ingenious!
So much is entailed here;
it's hard to grasp "what was"
or "wasn't"?
You had me at "666"
but it was the escort
that threw me off
as this sounded
more like regret
and anger than
honor and self-restraint.
Excellent, Sir Diamond!
~love to you, Devlin
25th Feb 2017 9:45pm
Lady Devlin.. your kind words inspire me.. sometimes i have no map, or guide.. i just write, what's in my heart.. i appreciate the love.. Dave
25th Feb 2017 9:31pm
Dave damn it this is a fucking fantastic write!!!
I love the striking images of you being to high but going down on her even though she is an escort showing her love like the beautiful soul you are..
excellent..
love Brenda
I love the striking images of you being to high but going down on her even though she is an escort showing her love like the beautiful soul you are..
excellent..
love Brenda
25th Feb 2017 9:52pm
Brenda.. thank you so much.. so glad you loved it.. she is an escort, who may have no choice in what she does to survive.. i don't judge, and want her to know a true man.. is a gentleman.. i appreciate the add.. love you.. Dave
25th Feb 2017 9:38pm
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Anonymous
27th Feb 2017 00:33am
My brother...this ink strikes me in a couple ways...one doing what is felt necessary to get through a day while realizing to a degree both are the same....doing what's needed to survive in this game called life...
Reflective as always! Love you my brother!
xoxo SisT
Reflective as always! Love you my brother!
xoxo SisT
2nd Mar 2017 00:23am
Lady Taryn.. much appreciated.. you know i try.. so glad you find the meaning in my ink.. most of the time, i just feel compelled to write.. don't always know where i'm headed, just know i need to get there.. love you, forever your brother.. Dave
