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Feathered Touch
you hold me close to you
in a luvers sweet embrace
our hearts beating together
yours vibrating thru my skin
forever inside your hug
is where I wish to always be
hearing precious songs of luv
our hearts whispering in harmony
intimately beating together
rest in my hug silently upon my breasts
inhale our scent of luv deeply
breathe in the fragrance of us
how beautiful and sacred
is your simple touch of luv
soft as a feather across my curves
Inspiration ~ a comment Bee left on a poem,
"Languishing Language" by Cherie
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
in a luvers sweet embrace
our hearts beating together
yours vibrating thru my skin
forever inside your hug
is where I wish to always be
hearing precious songs of luv
our hearts whispering in harmony
intimately beating together
rest in my hug silently upon my breasts
inhale our scent of luv deeply
breathe in the fragrance of us
how beautiful and sacred
is your simple touch of luv
soft as a feather across my curves
Inspiration ~ a comment Bee left on a poem,
"Languishing Language" by Cherie
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 24th Feb 2017
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24th Feb 2017 1:06am
Beautifully rendered is this quite sensuous write of two lovers being as one with the other. Your words capture the magic of the super keen photo. You have outdone yourself with this wonderful gem, flower. I loved it!
25th Feb 2017 4:21am
Hey Jerry.........you are so gracious with your words you leave me.........glad you felt this the way I did while writing it.......thought the pic was so sensual......I chnaged a line to match it.......thank you my sacred friend for making me smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
24th Feb 2017 6:33am
25th Feb 2017 4:30am
Hey JT........I'm touched by your words......thank you very much....glad you enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
24th Feb 2017 9:12am
Such a beautiful and sensual poem... that picture suits it so well...
Always a pleasure to read about you and your sweet Bee :-)
Love and hugs, Duende
Always a pleasure to read about you and your sweet Bee :-)
Love and hugs, Duende
Hey Duende........happy to see your smile........glad you liked the pic too.......thank you for your graceful words upon my ink........I'm so happy you enjoyed......Bee always inspires me......sending luv & hugs back your way xo :)
24th Feb 2017 9:15am
26th Feb 2017 1:34am
Hey Again........some times a simple touch can be so sensually felt across your skin........glad you liked this one.....honored by the RL add on......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Feb 2017 5:47pm
Beautiful accompanying image. The lighting is exquisite. The verse is tender and longing, retaining the innocence of longing desire., Purply One.
26th Feb 2017 1:42am
Hey Ahavati.......I changed a line or two to match this pic....thought is was beautiful.......I'm so glad my words touched as I wanted them is was awesome to write......thank you my friend your kind words.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 2:18am
It all sounds rather cosy, Flower. Excellent read.
26th Feb 2017 1:58am
Hey LP.......thank you so much for the visit........happy you got cozy with my words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Feb 2017 2:29am
26th Feb 2017 2:17am
Hey Purple.........thank you so very much.......appreciate the visit and the smile.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Feb 2017 2:38am
ur now on line
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comment of mine flowery purply
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26th Feb 2017 2:29am
Hey Again......I answered your other comment and yes I do read you and left you a comment on one of them......thank you for the visit.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th Feb 2017 3:11pm
Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 2:51am
Beautiful Sun Kissed, the imagery here is breathtaking...you have created a peaceful and tranquil moment between two beautifully. Take a bow my friend! With love - Sweet S xo :)
26th Feb 2017 2:45am
Hey Sweet S.......I'm so happy this took you to a peaceful moment of luv........it felt beautiful to write.......Bee is such a passionate soul......bowing back to you in thankfulness......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Feb 2017 3:30pm
sex is only good where there is real love, anything else is stress relief :-)
Love this piece :-)
Love this piece :-)
26th Feb 2017 2:57am
Hey David.......mmmmmmmm........and when it's real luv.......all you need is a simple touch........honored by the RL add on......thank you....purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Feb 2017 8:57pm
So delicately erotic! A feathered touch is exactly what a crowfly needs at this point. Fine work from Our Lady of Flowers!
26th Feb 2017 3:12am
Hey Crow.......a feathered touch is what most of us desire........most of us hope to share.......thank you for your graceful thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th Feb 2017 00:02am
26th Feb 2017 3:23am
Hey Magic......thank you for touching me with your words and smile upon my ink........honored by your visit.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th Feb 2017 8:34am
27th Feb 2017 00:07am
Hey Daniel......thank you for your uplifting words........glad you enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th Feb 2017 3:25am
The best part of being in love. The tender moments spent with someone you're willing to give up anything for.
28th Feb 2017 3:23pm
Hey X.....beautiful words you leave me......it's rare to find as out that luvs you for just being you.....so it's very natural when the simple things shared like a touch can be so intimate......thank you for the blessing of your visit......purple luv & hugs xo :)
