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Birthdays
her sisters sent her messages suddenly
out of the blue,
wanting to come and visit
wanting to plan,
catching up on birthday celebrations,
she hasn't celebrated anything in so long
she doesn't even think about it
she's not even sure she'll
live that long,
was her first thought,
then she wondered where that
could have come from
out of the blue,
wanting to come and visit
wanting to plan,
catching up on birthday celebrations,
she hasn't celebrated anything in so long
she doesn't even think about it
she's not even sure she'll
live that long,
was her first thought,
then she wondered where that
could have come from
Published 23rd Feb 2017
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23rd Feb 2017 10:27pm
23rd Feb 2017 10:35pm
lol .. Thank You so much JusTim_ oops, not mine, theirs ... but thank you for the read and thoughtful wishes ... not my birthday for a while :)
23rd Feb 2017 11:09pm
24th Feb 2017 8:35am
I've never been good at remembering the birthdays of my family and I usually try to forget mine. They stopped being happy a long, long time ago. Sometimes sudden changes come as a result of something in their lives happening suddenly. Since my stroke 5 years ago, I have been much more aware of my own mortality and wanting to heal old family wounds. People question my motives and all I can say in response is that I have a different perspective now. I know I have less years ahead of me, probably only 15-20 more to live considering my own health issues and the age of relatives when they died. Life has a way of changing what's important...
Having said that, nice 3, 4, 5 poem!
JJ
Having said that, nice 3, 4, 5 poem!
JJ
24th Feb 2017 11:46am
Thank You so much JJ for the read and thoughtful comments ... in my family, you don't forget, or you never hear the end of it ...lol, I've never put so much focus on things, I think we should celebrate everyday, it may be all we have. That's how I try to live, not that that is always easy. I wish you many happy years ahead ! 😊 JeJe
25th Feb 2017 3:28pm
I only celebrate un-birthdays - true birthdays just remind you that you are one year closer to death :-)
I like to share cheery thoughts like that - excellent ink :-)
I like to share cheery thoughts like that - excellent ink :-)
25th Feb 2017 3:59pm
Thank You David for the read and thoughtful comments ... much appreciated ... no reason to deny the truth ... lol 😊
2nd Mar 2017 8:58pm
Where indeed? Ms. Jemac you have a knack for writing ideas and thoughts with which I closely identify. I'll admit to feeling that hopeless at times. Having just read your "¿" piece I am struck by how difficult it is to achieve inner peace. Brava!
