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[ SK ] Bucket of Hate
Blood
Doused with bucket after bucket
heaped upon you in a flood
See them all laughing at
what a disgusting pig you are
wallowing in the mud
Fuck it!
THUD!
Feel the hammer brought down
cracking open your stupid bonehead
You're only wearing that crown
because of us --- belongs to someone
else worthy instead
THUNK!
like me!
God, I hate everything about you!
The hand sewn clothes you wear
Your fucking ugly pitted face!
Feel me bring down the sledge
putting you in your goddamn place
Not worthy to walk our halls
Not fit to play on our team
That's right
and at the end of the night
you can kiss goodbye
this fairy tale dream
So unworthy!
So unfit!
When it all comes down to it
Carrie White, you're just a pig in a sty
I hope to see you die
but only after
YOU EAT SHIT
Published 22nd Feb 2017
| Edited 27th Oct 2021
Author's Note
inspired by Stephen King's "Carrie"
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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There's a perspective I wasn't expecting. Now I understand the mentality from which this was written. I was a bit concerned at first because the language seemed juvenile even for mockery. And especially from a writer of your caliber. However, that's exactly what it is meant to convey. How utterly juvenile their actions and train-of-thought is.
24th Feb 2017 11:53am
I'll admit, Carrie is a SK story I struggle wth beyond the surface level. So much of it has to do with retaliation against being slighted, even when those slights are perceived. Chris Hargenson has no legitimate reason to first hate and then hurt Carrie. While Carrie has a legitimate reason to hate being bullied, she takes her rage out on an entire town of innocent bystanders. Both individuals "channel their thoughts" into hurting others, believing it is within their power to do so and it is justified.
