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among the heather
I walk among the heather
that decorate the rolling hills
slowly drift let my spirit go
*
deep in a trance I chant
give me peace on this day
*
I feel the great ones
ancient souls enter me
*
having an easy walk
they tell me to follow them
*
I mimic their footing
with their gentle steps
quietly I walk
so not to disturb
any slumbering soul
*
they say "look"
pointing over the vast dark
"this is behind you
you've been there
rest now among the purple blossoms"
*
as I saunter now among the heather
my soul blooms
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Re. among the heather
21st Feb 2017 4:06pm
What a beautiful walk you journeyed along. I could feel the grass under foot and smell the fresh air reading this one. My favorite...
they say "look"
pointing over the vast dark
"this is behind you
you've been there
rest now among the purple blossoms"
So love, my lady. Much love... :)
Willow
they say "look"
pointing over the vast dark
"this is behind you
you've been there
rest now among the purple blossoms"
So love, my lady. Much love... :)
Willow
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Re: Re. among the heather
21st Feb 2017 4:38pm
Re. among the heather
21st Feb 2017 4:43pm
Re: Re. among the heather
21st Feb 2017 5:15pm
Re. among the heather
To be able to lie or sit among such a wonderful
place within this picture it would automatically
take you into a world of delightful meditation you
would most assuredly would have. Along with that
meditation, combined with the beauty around you
would give you such a peace of my as n'er before
experienced.
place within this picture it would automatically
take you into a world of delightful meditation you
would most assuredly would have. Along with that
meditation, combined with the beauty around you
would give you such a peace of my as n'er before
experienced.
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Re: Re. among the heather
21st Feb 2017 10:56pm
thank you Jerry like you I go to places I'm not in my mind and it gives me peace.. the almond orchards are in bloom across the street.. maybe I'll go there today :) love Brenda
Re. among the heather
22nd Feb 2017 8:41pm
So lovely and tender compared to your other new endeavors. Just goes to show how versatile you are, Lady Crim.
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Re: Re. among the heather
23rd Feb 2017 10:22am
thank you Sir Crow I try to keep balance between my dark and light writes :) love Crim
Re. among the heather
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2017 3:33am
My Beautiful Brenda, your soul blooms every minute of every day, regardless of where you have walked...All which you have overcome is pure proof of that. I love you so very much!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. among the heather
23rd Feb 2017 10:23am
thank you my beautiful one for being there to walk through the darkness with me I love you so much!!! xo Brenda
Re: Re. among the heather
23rd Feb 2017 10:24am
thank you Xmar places like this is where my soul goes to meditate :) love Brenda
Re. among the heather
23rd Feb 2017 5:39am
Ahh, what a beautiful place, Crimsin, I can just imagine
sitting among the blossoms and taking a deep breath of
scented air.
your words are most soothing and lovely, talented lady...
sitting among the blossoms and taking a deep breath of
scented air.
your words are most soothing and lovely, talented lady...
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Re: Re. among the heather
23rd Feb 2017 10:25am
aw thank you lovely Kasai that is exactly what I needed when I wrote this to just take a deep breath while sitting among the heather.. love Crim
Re. among the heather
25th Feb 2017 2:24pm
Brenda.. simply beautiful.. love the spirtual journey, you take in this ink.. love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. among the heather
3rd Mar 2017 7:01am
Re. among the heather
25th Feb 2017 2:29pm
You know a poem like this has achieved what it should when it makes a Scot like me feel right at home :-)
this poem is pure braw (Scottish for really good) :-)
this poem is pure braw (Scottish for really good) :-)
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Re: Re. among the heather
3rd Mar 2017 7:02am
lol I like that word braw i'll take that as a great Scot compliment thank you David.. love Brenda