The Cunt That Cuts

A woman of many talents, you never cease to amaze me.
I loved the photo you chose for this wickedly amazing piece.
You don't just embrace the dark, you make it your bitch.
Fine job, Crim...

thank you graciously lovely Kasai.. love Crim

"I will out cunt you    
as I cut you    
you're my bitch    
where I go you follow"

I love your dark poetry. The way you spit it is with such fire. Cunts think they can play cute little bitch, but run at the slight of a true queen.

Great write

thank you LadyKilla this was actually about a man from my past that still haunts me and causes me paranoia.. love your comment though.. love Crim

you describe this darkness vividly, Crim -
death metal symphony & the ritual orgy...

thank you John love you style.. love Crim

I will out cunt you    
as I cut you    
you're my bitch    
where I go you follow     Damn! If only you could have seen the mischievous smile form across my face! I knew it was happening and I was powerless to stop it!

Awesome! We need to write a movie together!! Lol!

thank you Chad happy to bring a smile to your face with my venting.. love Brenda

Okay, dammit, you have brought to the
fore an absolutely ball-busting poem
which will remain in my thoughts forever.
You are right up there near the top of the
ball-busting mountain. I salute you!

thank you Jerry for such an awesome comment making my morning :) love Brenda

Well, damn!  You lit this one with a firecracker, dark or not.  I have this image in my head of a dark mistress casually flicking a whip against her leather boots as she speaks.  I am awed and humbled by your power and grace, my lady.  Much love...  :)
Willow

thank you lovely Willow love you view of me lol :) love Brenda

Someone pissed off the wrong woman and now there's hell to pay! She's coming with both barrels blasting! Awesome write Brenda!

thank you Xmar you made me smile wide on your take of this write :) love Brenda

"I will out cunt you    
as I cut you    
you're my bitch    
where I go you follow"

such a beautiful and original expression - masterful  - love it :-)

thank you David I cherish you my dear friend :) love Brenda

Utterly outstanding, captivating and mind wrenching.  I love your imagery.  Even when I got to maggots and thought... "maybe not...." I was already hooked and you had me to the end, shocked sensibilities and all.  That, is a very rare find for me.  Kudos.  

thank you most graciously dear lady you made my night.. love Crim

Whoa... it was raw, n vivid enough n then you mentioned maggots... yea I was done then! Remind me NOT to rile u up ever!! lol

aw Poe thank you for showing love on this write maggots and all :) love Crim

Fuggen eh....

thank you graciously.. love Crim

if "out cunting" is not a thing yet
it sure as shit needs to be
absolutely loved this write brenda
so damn fierce!

your comment gave me the giggles :) thank you beautiful one.. love Brenda

I don't know about the hell but I can't get enough of your writes, Crim.  I have mixed emotions about the title (desire, abject fear) but the rest is sublime.  

lol on the title I see what you mean :) thank you Sir Crow.. love Crim

Brenda.. this is simply brilliant.. i'm speechless, just blown away by your ink.. into the list it goes.. love..




Dave

thank you Dave for the love and the add.. xo Brenda