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---with the addition
of fictional addiction
A justified bonified
bone if I just died
truly inside of you
while violently boning you
with fictional friction
alone with you ----
---let stalk kit out---
---let's talk it out ---
Before my cock shoots out like a rocket
from the hole in my front pocket
A ballistic heat-seeking rocket
bottled-up bottle rockets
shooting into your empty eye sockets
My voice shooting out fears into your ears
after smoking some pot with a few shots
and a couple of beers
yelling out to my peers
---REPEATING---
An anonymous synonymous
ominous harmonious
harm in us----
THERE'S A RAT IN THE VAN!!!!!
___take an ativan.....
---DEAD---
Get rid of the past
Get rid of the pest
Lay down....
down...
and at last...
get some rest...
of fictional addiction
A justified bonified
bone if I just died
truly inside of you
while violently boning you
with fictional friction
alone with you ----
---let stalk kit out---
---let's talk it out ---
Before my cock shoots out like a rocket
from the hole in my front pocket
A ballistic heat-seeking rocket
bottled-up bottle rockets
shooting into your empty eye sockets
My voice shooting out fears into your ears
after smoking some pot with a few shots
and a couple of beers
yelling out to my peers
---REPEATING---
An anonymous synonymous
ominous harmonious
harm in us----
THERE'S A RAT IN THE VAN!!!!!
___take an ativan.....
---DEAD---
Get rid of the past
Get rid of the pest
Lay down....
down...
and at last...
get some rest...
Published 19th Feb 2017
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20th Feb 2017 7:02pm
Deep.I totally get it man. Ive been in that boat hoping not to sink to deep and climb back up after the brief interlude. Nice and must say needing a few more good reads on this one and will figure it out in its entirely man,Tell then i still say its most defiantly one of your better ones.Keep the write..
21st Feb 2017 2:46pm
I appreciate the word play here so much, very clever, but in appreciating it so much I lost the meaning of the piece, still that is my conundrum to solve :-)
excellent work :-)
excellent work :-)
9th Apr 2017 1:25am
Yeah, I don't fully understand it myself. I write in puzzles sometimes that I can't figure out or am trying to figure out
