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Cold desire.
I stand out,
in our pool of desire.
My pelvis flames,
in a ball of fire.
We're dancing close.
I inhale heavy musk.
Here I am,
breathing in your lust.
Pheromones burn,
and then transpire.
Gazing around,
everyone seems wired.
You whisper something,
but I can't quite hear.
The music is loud.
It thumps in my ear.
You reach out,
and bring our lips together.
I feel pangs,
I hope will last forever.
I feel your eyes on my body,
silently beg.
Your touch is a sweet melody,
a song between my legs.
But you've let go,
and I fall fast.
It's a sticky lie.
I'm awake at last.
You've left me alone.
My heart has a sliver.
Pain flows through me,
its vast as a river.
in our pool of desire.
My pelvis flames,
in a ball of fire.
We're dancing close.
I inhale heavy musk.
Here I am,
breathing in your lust.
Pheromones burn,
and then transpire.
Gazing around,
everyone seems wired.
You whisper something,
but I can't quite hear.
The music is loud.
It thumps in my ear.
You reach out,
and bring our lips together.
I feel pangs,
I hope will last forever.
I feel your eyes on my body,
silently beg.
Your touch is a sweet melody,
a song between my legs.
But you've let go,
and I fall fast.
It's a sticky lie.
I'm awake at last.
You've left me alone.
My heart has a sliver.
Pain flows through me,
its vast as a river.
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Re. Cold desire.
18th Feb 2017 4:18pm
Re. Cold desire.
18th Feb 2017 8:18pm
Re. Cold desire.
18th Feb 2017 8:32pm
Great write about waking up from such a lusciously delightful dream
Welcome to Dup land xD
Welcome to Dup land xD
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Re: Re. Cold desire.
20th Feb 2017 1:43am
Thank you Rose for your kind welcome. If my poem was in any way memorable to you, I am extremely flattered. I look forward to discovering more gems from you.
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20th Feb 2017 6:50pm
Re. Cold desire.
18th Feb 2017 10:09pm
Favourite lines:
My pelvis flames,
In a ball of fire.
Your touch is a sweet melody,
A song between my legs.
It's a sticky lie (transpires to be a dream not reality)
My pelvis flames,
In a ball of fire.
Your touch is a sweet melody,
A song between my legs.
It's a sticky lie (transpires to be a dream not reality)
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Re: Re. Cold desire.
19th Feb 2017 7:50pm
Thank you Solomon_Song for taking the time to read and comment on my work. I appreciate your feedback. I hope to have more favourite lines to give you one day.
Re. Cold desire.
19th Feb 2017 3:35am
It doesn't sound like a dream to
Me , it sounds like a metaphorical description of a real life event that left you feeling hurt. :(
Very descriptive and well written .
I have similar pains.
Thank you for sharing this poem.
Me , it sounds like a metaphorical description of a real life event that left you feeling hurt. :(
Very descriptive and well written .
I have similar pains.
Thank you for sharing this poem.
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Re: Re. Cold desire.
19th Feb 2017 7:51pm
Thank you Leo_Sunset for taking the time out of your day to read and comment. Sometimes, the only way past our pain is through it.
Re. Cold desire.
19th Feb 2017 9:12pm
Re: Re. Cold desire.
20th Feb 2017 1:39am
Thank you U2b888. It gives me a sense of pride to know that you have enjoyed my work. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. (:
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Re: Re. Cold desire.
20th Feb 2017 1:40am
Thank you Exquisite_Chaos for your feedback. Welcome to DUP. I look forward to reading great things from you. (:
Re. Cold desire.
20th Feb 2017 4:12am
Super fantastic job you really stand out on this and the other two hope to read more sometime
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Re. Cold desire.
20th Feb 2017 9:16pm
I will aspire to inspire more wonderful compliments from you Kavik1. Thank you for taking the time comment. I'm sincerely grateful. (:
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3rd Mar 2017 9:26pm
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11th Mar 2017 7:30pm
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Re: Re. Cold desire.
17th Aug 2019 11:12pm
I imagine 'poetess' is much sexier when you say it.
Keep calling me that. (;
Many thanks to you.
Yours,
LostGirl
Keep calling me that. (;
Many thanks to you.
Yours,
LostGirl
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24th Oct 2019 00:10am
Well that sounds like such an exquisite dream, how could a girl resist?
Thank you darling.
Losty
Thank you darling.
Losty
Re. Cold desire.
9th Apr 2020 8:00pm
It is all well and good until the cold truth of reality stares you in the face.
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7th Mar 2024 6:15pm