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When It Rains [ Competition Poem]
When it rains I will stand under it to wash my pain away
When it rains I will wash away these tears that God will take away
When it rains I will be at ease for the pattering sound that hits the ground is so turbulent yet so gentle.
When it rains I will let my every emotion go till it rains no more
When it rains I will cry as loud as the thunder
When it rains I will have the chance to let out my inner pain till I'm too exhausted to even keep on going.
When it rains it will pour down on me as I'm washing away all my troubles and tribulations
When it rains I will dance under it as I feel one with the rain
When it rains I'll feel cleansed of my inner fears
When it rains I will feel free from everything that's trapping me inside.
When it rains will you come and join me?.
When it rains I will wash away these tears that God will take away
When it rains I will be at ease for the pattering sound that hits the ground is so turbulent yet so gentle.
When it rains I will let my every emotion go till it rains no more
When it rains I will cry as loud as the thunder
When it rains I will have the chance to let out my inner pain till I'm too exhausted to even keep on going.
When it rains it will pour down on me as I'm washing away all my troubles and tribulations
When it rains I will dance under it as I feel one with the rain
When it rains I'll feel cleansed of my inner fears
When it rains I will feel free from everything that's trapping me inside.
When it rains will you come and join me?.
Published 18th Feb 2017
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18th Feb 2017 9:22am
This is very good... Using that rain as a tool for emotional well being... A great concept! Me, I'd be crying becuz if it though lol
Good luck in the comp. babe :)
Good luck in the comp. babe :)
18th Feb 2017 9:36am
Thank you baby, I'm happy you liked it and I know you big baby jk lol Thanks for reading mmmuah!
18th Feb 2017 8:26pm
Suggests a purifying moment standing au naturel in a (natural) shower. The language I am sure would inspire one to respond to the plea in the last line and join in. (Something I have yet to try in real life.)
22nd Feb 2017 1:58pm
7th Apr 2017 1:06pm
I love how you paint vivid images with your words using the rain as your tears and your pain as the thunder I feel your pain great job love it
