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Cruiser & Bruiser
When I saw you on the lot it was lust at first glance
You were shiny you looked hot I took the chance
Let me in I closed the door you smelled of leather
Looked fit and ready for most any kind of weather
Took me awhile though to get used to your style
You wanted to go slow when out treading the mile
Taking charge one day I demanded much more
Rode you in a way you'd never been ridden before
Want you to know what you can do sweet wheels
So when we go slow you'll get how thrust feels
And you're doing so well you really are learning
If I ride you to hell you'll ache for the burning
But I will treat you nice there's no need to worry
Just don't you think twice when I tell you to hurry
I think I'll call you Abigail you're more than a car
You're my Nissan X Trail and we're going to go far
You were shiny you looked hot I took the chance
Let me in I closed the door you smelled of leather
Looked fit and ready for most any kind of weather
Took me awhile though to get used to your style
You wanted to go slow when out treading the mile
Taking charge one day I demanded much more
Rode you in a way you'd never been ridden before
Want you to know what you can do sweet wheels
So when we go slow you'll get how thrust feels
And you're doing so well you really are learning
If I ride you to hell you'll ache for the burning
But I will treat you nice there's no need to worry
Just don't you think twice when I tell you to hurry
I think I'll call you Abigail you're more than a car
You're my Nissan X Trail and we're going to go far
Published 16th Feb 2017
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18th Feb 2017 10:22pm
an ode to Nissan - it's good now and again to have a nice poem to read that is positive and fun :-)
did you ever notice that DU does not have a category like FUN or Comedy :-)
did you ever notice that DU does not have a category like FUN or Comedy :-)
19th Feb 2017 00:43am
We bought this car a few weeks ago, 2008 model but very little mileage and the luxury edition to boot. Just had the whole body deep polished today, it's looking like new. Have always treated my cars rather badly, but this baby is gonna get the deluxe treatment from A to Z. Yeah, no comedy section, that is a bit odd. i had to place this in love poems. Thanks for commenting, you really are kind. Hope your weekend is how you wish it.
