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VALENTINE'S DAY LAMENT
Originally written for FLC8's Valentine Day competition.
Chocolate, wine and roses,
Dark stockings and lingerie
She'll look forward to getting -
If only she were with me.
Chocolate, wine and roses,
Dark stockings and lingerie
She'll look forward to getting -
If only she were with me.
Published 15th Feb 2017
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16th Feb 2017 10:03pm
Succinct Solomon...once upon a time a woman, or man for that matter, would get a lovely anonymous surprise like this on Valentine's Day and what joy it would bring them...it doesn't appear to happen these days
17th Feb 2017 10:03pm
'If only she were with me'
It says so much, pulling it all
together into a well written lament...
It says so much, pulling it all
together into a well written lament...
