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My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
In the depths of the night I swear I saw your halo
Drifting above, when my thoughts were calm
Ornate but simple like the humble daisy
Lovely and stunning from flower to bulb
Oh how I dreamt that you could be mine
Vision of beauty as the belle of the ball
Enchanting the evening as we waltz to and fro
You had my heart and I knew it was luv
O my beloved, my truth, my valentine
Until death do we part, my love to you I bid
Drifting above, when my thoughts were calm
Ornate but simple like the humble daisy
Lovely and stunning from flower to bulb
Oh how I dreamt that you could be mine
Vision of beauty as the belle of the ball
Enchanting the evening as we waltz to and fro
You had my heart and I knew it was luv
O my beloved, my truth, my valentine
Until death do we part, my love to you I bid
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Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
Anonymous
13th Feb 2017 4:17am
Beautiful! Outstanding job with the acrostic form and perfectly conveyed for the theme.
Tim, It's nice to see your range in different styles, most definitely will always keep your readers anticipating for more.
Tim, It's nice to see your range in different styles, most definitely will always keep your readers anticipating for more.
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13th Feb 2017 4:25am
Thanks Rina...Love and heartache are my favorite things to write about and I love to try out new forms. 🙂
Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
Anonymous
13th Feb 2017 5:27am
A beautiful passionate piece.
Full of vivid romantic details.
Very nice ink, my friend.
Full of vivid romantic details.
Very nice ink, my friend.
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Re: Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
13th Feb 2017 5:37am
Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
13th Feb 2017 5:37am
Re: Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
13th Feb 2017 6:17am
Thank you Kasai...The double acrostic is the first letter of each line spells out a phrase as does the last letter in each line
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13th Feb 2017 6:18am
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13th Feb 2017 7:21am
Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
13th Feb 2017 10:17am
Double acrostic... of course I needed to check it out!
Great job on this one... it really works without affecting the content...
Great job on this one... it really works without affecting the content...
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Re: Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
13th Feb 2017 12:41pm
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Re: Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
13th Feb 2017 3:14pm
Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
Okay wow. I have (painfully) composed acrostics, but never attempted a double. Hat tip, Tim.
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Re: Re. My Dear Valentine (double acrostic)
13th Feb 2017 6:07pm
Grazie, you are talented, I'm sure if you tried you wouldn't have much trouble.