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haiku
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lunar crescents glow
lighting nearby placid pond
skinny dippers splash
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Have a beautiful Sunday !!
Published 12th Feb 2017
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12th Feb 2017 8:15pm
Very nice.
It seems with every full moon
poetry has a way of capturing
its beams...
It seems with every full moon
poetry has a way of capturing
its beams...
13th Feb 2017 1:46am
Anonymous
12th Feb 2017 8:50pm
Beautiful visions.
So much power in just a few words.
Very nice ink, my friend.
So much power in just a few words.
Very nice ink, my friend.
13th Feb 2017 1:47am
13th Feb 2017 2:51am
13th Feb 2017 3:03am
There is nothing you can see that is not a flower; there is nothing you can think that is not the moon.💕
Anonymous
13th Feb 2017 4:26am
Exquisite, i can just picture in my mind's eye the imagery.
13th Feb 2017 4:34am
Thank you very much Rina. I don't do haiku/senryu too often unless inspired. It's great to see it appreciated.
Anonymous
13th Feb 2017 4:42am
I'm a huge fan of haiku/senryu or micro poetry. It's much harder than people realize or appreciate. The discipline in finding just the right words to convey in small package speak volumes, without it coming across as forced.
13th Feb 2017 4:44am
