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Mind&Body Domination
She is my fuck toy
my little
subhuman
bitch
she begs
"Please!"
"Please degrade me!"
and believe me I did
I told her she would
never
amount
to
anything
only what I wished
a slut
a dirty
whore
and if she bore me
she wore my handprint
across her face
or a bruised necklace
where a cross used to hang
a plain
pretty
young girl
turned hellish
by my ways
she saves every
word I say
because she loves it
best
when I
fuck
her
brain
my little
subhuman
bitch
she begs
"Please!"
"Please degrade me!"
and believe me I did
I told her she would
never
amount
to
anything
only what I wished
a slut
a dirty
whore
and if she bore me
she wore my handprint
across her face
or a bruised necklace
where a cross used to hang
a plain
pretty
young girl
turned hellish
by my ways
she saves every
word I say
because she loves it
best
when I
fuck
her
brain
Published 12th Feb 2017
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12th Feb 2017 7:32am
this is a powerful write Alyssa you have a strong poetic voice which I admire..
love Crim
love Crim
12th Feb 2017 7:45am
Awe I admire you right back! Thank you for all of your kind feedback. This kind of writing I usually dont share, so it felt good to post.
13th Feb 2017 1:29am
What I really like about this is that it is very explicit but you end the poem by bringing attention to the psychological side of this behaviour which makes it very interesting. Also, the part about bruises where a cross use to be is a brilliant line. Please share more like this! X
13th Feb 2017 12:03pm
No problem! I feel like as women, our worst enemy is ourselves. We constantly pick ourselves apart. But it makes us stronger. Have a great day and thanks for reading!(:
13th Feb 2017 3:49am
13th Feb 2017 10:32am
13th Feb 2017 7:56pm
hard for a man with my life to understand either part of this kind of relationship - I have no moral objection, I just don't comprehend.
honest and raw, poetry at its best :-)
honest and raw, poetry at its best :-)
13th Feb 2017 8:49pm
Don't worry it's kind of like a Fight Club type write lol I mentally fuck myself. ya know what I mean? although if a girl really wanted me to hit her, I would do so..but lightly😂 Thank you for the feedback as always(: ❤Alyssa
16th Feb 2017 8:10am
Diabolical and sadistic. Raw and honest. Harsh and aggressive. Your poem is captivating from start to finish. Nice job.
